A Great Fight Among the Heavens

Author, don't you feel uncomfortable reading what you wrote? I broke up Zhang Cuishan and Yin Susu at the beginning, and asked Yin Susu to post it. It was good to write it down, but it turned out that the protagonist is sick, and the more I wrote, the more serious it became. When the female protagonist of Resident Evil appeared, I was about to post it. The male protagonist is still a dead eunuch. While writing the female character to fight and jealous, the progress of the system strategy is almost 100%. I wrote that the protagonist is sick and has no idea. He is a dead eunuch, disgusting.

After reading the first nine chapters, I thought it was quite interesting. Seeing "Resident Evil"... I feel that the style of painting is extremely inconsistent. Then there was another call to summon the Huashan Sect... Even if you write "simultaneous time travel", I will consider you to be following the market trend, but what kind of mess are you doing? Author: "I'm so creative, a big fight in the world, the first mashup in history, unlimited summon flow." Me: "Slip away, we are destined to meet again~"

Ada King Claire Rosemary Grace

The book idea seems great, but I, an old bookworm, now prefer to read one without a female protagonist.

The author is really good at writing urban articles. You should write more about cities. But sometimes you can't grasp the scale. You can be more flexible, but the bottom line is higher. Seriously, the author is not a bad person. Come on.

I'm at a loss for words. I hope to see this book on the list one day. That would prove that the author didn't waste this idea, but I can't follow it now.

The subject matter is good, but I don't like the writing anyway.

The author's description of women is okay, so keep an eye on you.

I actually just read half of Chapter 2. But I think the idea is pretty good. I read the introduction before. What should I do if I still think about integrating other people from different worlds? As a result, he said that because the world was broken, only this part of Ice and Fire Island existed, and other places did not exist. This was good. It was similar to Infinite Flow, but Infinite Flow traveled to other worlds, and his was directly merged with other worlds. To be precise, they are fragments of other worlds, which is actually quite good. Explore and gather development force partners in different world fragments. If well written, this is a good subject.

Although the writing is quite interesting, do we need so many women? The length should be shorter. The aggregation of fragments from different worlds is really a very good idea. You can have some girls, but not too many. The focus is still on improving the story, otherwise the good idea will be wasted.

I've read so many books, movies and TV shows that I can't keep up with your imagination.

It looks good. Please write more, author. Are there any books you have written before? Let me introduce.