
This Slime Is Too Perverted
这个史莱姆过于变态
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 52k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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5Fans
23Chapters
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For example, in the latest plot, Xiao Bai said that he was looking for food, and the protagonist asked Xiao Bai to go to the Dragon Tooth Valley, but why it was the Dragon Tooth Valley was not explained at all. You can't just assume that the protagonist is a reborn person and not describe the protagonist's thinking process. As a reader, I just feel that the conclusion is inexplicable, without any sense of participation or involvement. Also, Xiaobai caught bugs and the protagonist was whipped away by the tail. He happened to bump into an injured elf, and that elf happened to be a key figure in the plot. Do you think this kind of coincidental and outrageous encounter is reasonable? It couldn't be an encounter that the protagonist proactively planned after he had a certain strength because he had mastered the key information about rebirth. It's really boring to always rely on coincidence and luck to promote the plot.
The plundering skills + dragon girl start, which has a bit of a fungus master flavor, but the hook is too small, the plot is written too hastily, and the protagonist's strength does not match the development of the plot.