The Dream of the God of Mercy

It's so perseverant that I can still write 500,000 words before it's published.

Leave yourself a comment to decompress.

The writing of this novel is too retro. The first ten pictures have no explosive or exciting points, nor are they abstract and vivid, nor do they expand the world view.

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This introduction is too literary. The introduction of Qidian Male Channel should concisely and clearly state some of the events in your outline and what the protagonist gets through these events, so as to attract readers 🙂 Is the author female?

You can put the current introduction content at the end, and write something attractive in the first three or two sentences. Author, please go to the comment section of each book to promote your book. Most people only treat it as advertisements, and not many people will click on it. It is recommended that you go to the book friend circles of each book to not only recommend the book, but also follow him if there is a grade. As long as you are not a wealthy book friend, you will basically look back to see who is being followed. Seeing that you have a book with a lot of words, you should click in and take a look. There was an author who followed tens of thousands of book friends and attracted many people to read his books!

The introduction is confusing, full of words and unclear meaning.

Awesome, the unsigned author of 600,000 words can still write, it's really a case of love 🙂

When I first came here, I discovered three problems 1--The beginning is too literary, trying to express literary talent but it is more blunt. You should eliminate exaggerated rhetoric, such as Li Yu's theory, "At the beginning of opening a book, you should use strange sentences to catch the eye." Your opening sentence is a bit mediocre, but you should use shocking words to make people shocked at first sight and unwilling to abandon it. 2--The plot is too old-fashioned. This plot has become chewed bagasse. No matter whether future generations want to think about it, they can't taste it anymore. Regardless of whether there is a reversal in the follow-up, this plot is already preconceived and boring. So if you want to write results, I suggest you have to grasp the current trend. If you want to write about classical immortality, you can learn from Xuanjian Shixianzhu. 3--The character is a bit weird. Fengling is the male protagonist of the ancient revenge style. The setting is just old, and Qingshui is quite weird. He jumps back and forth between the two nuns and the little virgin. If you don't grasp this degree well, the character will appear very weird.

It's amazing. It's already halfway to a million.