After Quitting the Game, the Monster Girls Became Yandere

After reading it, let me tell you the truth, one good word and one bad word. Good things: The emotions are well written and the yandere is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. Bad words: The author has completely corrected his illness. He writes as if he has met someone before. It feels so scary, 😱😱 so gravity.

It's time for my favorite niche twisted yandere article again😋 It's a pity that articles like Qidian are easy to dislike.

If you want me, just fuck the heroine directly, fuck these heroines directly, if it doesn't work once, just 100 times

There is almost no human power in this book, and writing it like this is quite a tightrope. If you deal with the relationship between monster girls, especially among a bunch of lunatics, I have read yandere-type books before, and the end result is that the writing is very good, but I can't stand it. It's too lunatic and I can't think of the protagonist at all. How to survive in a situation where everyone is accepted, the writing is too good, and the portrayal of the yandere is too good, but it becomes a restriction, especially when all the members are yandere, so the author must think clearly about how to write several more, and how to write, and to protect the "human forces" that are no longer human at all.

Should the author carefully confirm the character of the male protagonist? I don't know why, but I really feel that the character of the male protagonist is very strange when I look at it. It makes me feel uncomfortable and awkward. Because in the main text, I really rarely see the male protagonist trying to communicate with the female protagonist, and then I always see the female protagonist doing evil, and then he realizes that he wants to break up with the female protagonist. As a result, there will be no communication in the next project, and what will happen next, it is equivalent to a feeling of being incompetent and standing at the same time. Obviously I really like kind male protagonists, but I also feel that the author wants to write a kind and normal male protagonist, but the actual performance of this male protagonist is very awkward! After thinking about it for a while, I felt that maybe the protagonist is like the Riddler (I take back a few curse words here). He is always thinking about this and that in his head, speculating over and over again, and then he defines Monster Girl for himself. The male protagonist's ability to go back and become stronger is already considered a very top level ability, but it's strange that you don't try to educate various female protagonists. Maybe you, the author, think that Monster Girl has developed a certain personality that is difficult to change over the years, but I think you should at least write it so that the male protagonist can try to solve the problem every time he meets Monster Girl, and then think of other solutions after trying to no avail. It's like you have arrested a suspect who is almost confirmed to be a murderer, but you have to hire a defense lawyer to try to exonerate the suspect. Because only after the protagonist tries to persuade and communicate to no avail, what he does next is legitimate. After all, what you want to write is a kind-hearted male protagonist with normal views, right? On the contrary, the description of the monster girl is quite normal.

I feel that the bond between the monster girl and the protagonist is deeper than that between the passerby and the protagonist. The passerby feels as weak as the NPC. It feels strange to see the protagonist thinking about how to use the monster girl for the NPC on the roadside. Didn't he have a favorite monster girl when he played the game? He has obviously traveled through time, why not find it?

Nice! But for this plot and characters, the author should hire Haji Gao. Is the author really a human being?

It's too difficult to write this kind of article. It's easy to end up being unfinished. Please do your best, author.

It's okay, but the main character is too bad. He has no strength and death retrieval, and is treated like a wild monster like 486.

Don't worry, you are one of the few people I've ever read who wrote something truly yandere-y.

What a wonderful niche and twisted niche text, two monthly passes

The writing is indeed good, and those who come here for the yandere tag will not be disappointed (the progress is as of Chapter 60+)

Author, your writing is so good, I can't stand it, brother running away

I thought that "drug addicts" and "gambling addiction" are not cute. When I saw the latest chapter 119, I was completely disgusted with these monster girls related to money banks, and I didn't have a good impression at all. I know that it is impossible to describe every monster girl, and these are probably just a cushion to serve the development of the plot.

Aren't you going to fix the settings? Having raised thousands of characters is too exaggerated. If you follow the harem style, the upper limit of the author's writing power is generally a dozen or even less. Do you plan to use the remaining characters as background versions? It would be better to reduce the number of characters and set the main character to be a city lord or a mini-boss, and the miscellaneous fish under his control would be wild monsters. One by one strategy. Although it is a formula, there will be no problems if you play it slowly and steadily. Otherwise, I don't know how you would write the emotional line and plot behind it.

If you can go back and still be so coward, just train them like dogs. If you save them, they won't come back. They were so cs in the previous life.

I suggest you kill all these idiots😡

Do you have any recommendations for this kind of twisted literature Shura Field?

It's not like monster girls are killing people randomly. I can't accept it.

It smells so good. This yandere is really the most satisfying to watch others provoke yandere.

These heroines are all ⭐️ depressed and that's why they are all so crazy.

So even if the monster girl destroys human society and cuts off civilization, the protagonist will still be followed by a group of things? Also, even if the protagonist learns that these monster girls have done so many crazy things because of him, he doesn't have any mood swings at all. The father-in-law is married to the mother-in-law.

Why is the protagonist's harem only composed of girls😡😡😡Let's get some mature women😡😡😡

At present, the monster's feelings for the male protagonist have become a handle for exploitation, but the female protagonist's illness prevents the male protagonist from taking off and being unscrupulous.

Is it like God punishing these monster girls who made big mistakes and then telling them that they have been saved?

Boss, is this really a love story? Why am I getting goosebumps?

It's quite interesting. I originally thought it was a harem love story about monster girls, but I didn't expect it to be a monster containment type story. The world view setting is more like a story in which the containment of monsters in a certain world fails, leading to the end of the world, and the monsters are all transformed into women, and the protagonist re-contains the monsters. It's quite fun, but the writing is not very smooth. Well, there's nothing you can do about it. You can't force things like writing, so just make do with it.

It's quite well written, really. If I have a monthly pass, I will give it to you. Please persist

The protagonist really skips the plot and skips life 🙂

Can the author use AI to make some character illustrations?