Pokemon: I'm Really Just a Photographer

Anyone can publish a book, even a flashing toucan (

When I read Chapter 26, the four words above were my most intuitive reflection of this book. It is said that he is a photographer, but the description of the photo shoot and the plot are all in one sentence. There is little mention of composition and situation, and there are very few descriptions of daily photos. The main plot is about the protagonist playing tricks with Gengar. Although it is not impossible, it does have little to do with the so-called photographer title. It is said that there are videos of the protagonists filming, but there is basically no feedback from the audience. In the middle, a Shenhao fan suddenly appeared to sponsor the live broadcast equipment, and also praised a lot of the protagonists, but there were no specific works, just that they had a sense of life and so on. Other than that, I have the impression that there is no feedback on the protagonists' works. Writing about travel in the Pokémon world is not a problem in itself, but since there is a photographer's gimmick, the writing should give more emphasis to the shooting of the protagonist. In addition, the identity of the photographer itself has subtext, it is not the person in the picture. As a photographer, the identity that is more suitable for character creation should be a witness, not necessarily a person who has experienced the story. Under the theme of being a photographer, it would be more in line with the title to depict the protagonist witnessing some touching stories and spread them, whether ordinary or mythical. In the current plot, I don't see the necessity of the protagonist as a photographer in terms of story and setting. It is just a gimmick at the moment, and this gimmick doesn't even account for much in the article. If you put aside the title of the novel and just look at this book as a Pokémon-themed travel article, the warm description is not bad, but with this title, I can only give this evaluation. I hope that the author can examine what kind of story he wants to write and adjust the ratio of various elements in his own article. At the same time, since he wants to write about shooting, he also needs to provide the composition, storyboarding, scene description, etc. Of the finished product. Just a sentence of shooting, editing, and uploading... Readers will not know what you shot and what the effect of the things you shot will be, and the sense of immersion and persuasiveness will be greatly reduced. Don't let the title element of the photographer exist just as a gimmick like a cheat finger or a background board.

Forget it Suicune, his name is quite cool, but it's a pity that he was caught with a fishing net.

Gugu

I suggest that when Gengar says this, it would be better if you put a bracket next to his cry, otherwise it will be very tiring to read.

Dear legendary trainers, legendary breeders, and legendary coordinators, I know it is normal to raise books during the new book period, but I still want to ask you to help me get to the last chapter from Tuesday to Wednesday, can you? Because what I'm looking at at Qidian now is to test the waters on pk so as to get more traffic. I will write the story well, so can you move your little hands and turn to the last page every day? Please, don't let this book be stillborn, kneel down and worship I will update it hard after it is released, please!

To explain, most of the mythical beasts and phantom beasts have tribes. They are not as rare as many people think, and their strength varies. Just take the first-level gods and fantasy beasts as examples: two Lugias, one big and one small, appeared at the same time in the anime; two Rayquazas appeared at the same time in the Hoopa theatrical version and one was a flash; the player in Zhuzi conquered two Milertons or Gulltons; in LA, Arceus made it clear that he had multiple clones, and one was conquered by the player; a group of Salud appeared in the theatrical version; in the Sun and Moon anime, multiple Meltans and two Solgaleo appeared.

It's a bit difficult to write Pokémon Dreams well. I still prefer the traditional growth genre, not the live-streaming genre. It's a bit nondescript. Don't tell me that there are gods who make Pokémon. Nowadays they are just so-so.

The author of Starting Point can be anyone, let alone a big-billed bird.

The character creation is not very good. The characters in some incidents feel a bit mentally retarded. They forcefully find reasons that are not consistent with the reality for the sake of the plot. Moreover, I believe that with the short videos and live broadcasts, those people should know the knowledge introduced by the protagonist. The author's ability in this aspect needs to be strengthened. Furthermore, since you are a photographer, you should do what a photographer should do, and other skills and so on must serve the photography industry. Otherwise, why is this book called this name? You shouldn't fix too many other things, because there are really too many other Pokémon stories, and in addition, the new author's creations are not as reasonable as those of the old author, so those who should be tired of aesthetics are already tired of aesthetics. Everything else is pretty good, come on, author, I hope you write better and better.