Large Model Cultivation Manual

This is the beginning of a typical "high-concept squeezing flow" online article. Under the shell of a cyber cultivator, it tells the story of a low-level cow and horse being systematically crushed. In terms of the plot, the rhythm first slows down and then picks up. In the early stage, a lot of inhumane treatment of level 0 employees is laid out - handshakes in the building, mushy meals, colleagues dying suddenly on the spot - these details are not only a display of the world view, but also a preparation for the "blame" at the end. When the protagonist is pushed out to take the blame due to the labeling problem, although the turning point is expected, due to the sufficient foreshadowing in the previous chapter, there is a suffocating sense of reality that "it is true". The identity of the time traveler has not yet been revealed, but the foreshadowing has been laid. In terms of character design, the protagonist Xu Xing is a typical "sober bad boy". He knows that he is being painted, and he also understands that the system is absurd, but he is unable to resist. In the end, his refusal to sign is a trace of his remaining pride. Section Chief Zhang is established as a bureaucratic villain in just a few strokes. His blame-shifting rhetoric and self-revealing threats such as "Do you think I got here by defeating my predecessor?" Accurately depict the face of a sophisticated self-interested person in the system. In terms of writing style, the author takes a cold and realistic route, does not pile up rhetoric, and relies on precise details to speak. "Shaking hands in the building and reaching the opposite side" describes the crowding on the ground floor, and "the marked comments were erased" implies that the power has tampered with the facts, which is clean and neat. The dialogue is restrained, the psychological description is not sensational, and the feeling of depression is even greater. Overall, this is an excellent opening chapter. It does not rush to make the protagonist resist, but first makes the readers believe that this is a world where ordinary people will really die and be wronged. The sense of despair is solid enough, and the subsequent comeback has weight.

The plot setting is novel, the protagonist has the temperament of a hard-working social animal, and the overall feeling is that I am cultivating immortality in the high-tech era. The writing is a bit sluggish, but overall it is okay, but not bad.

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