Beginning with Wuqinjin and Practicing Hundreds of Times to Become an Immortal

The fighting is well written, but I feel like the author's writing is a bit rustic. It's also a bit overwhelming to the protagonist. He always points to the protagonist's lack of physical strength for a fight. The logic is also the same. The man named Liu agreed to a two-month fight to the death to avenge his son. This is a bit unrealistic. If he really wants to kill the other party, he will only pretend to agree and then kill him if he finds an opportunity. The main character has been chosen, and the main character has been a human being in two lives. He has not done enough to kill people, destroy corpses and eliminate traces. People have found out, and they don't understand that there are not so many flukes in this world. If there are more flukes, that is a loophole. The main character in this book can live a long time, which is entirely due to the author. It is too obvious

I also wrote a book about Wu Qin Xi, and I'm still revising the draft.

It's well written, but don't do anything too big. The protagonist doesn't have the strength to participate, which makes it very frustrating. This incident of the Duer Cult cannot be handled by just one city 🙂

I was a little confused by the title of the book. Is this a novel about immortality or about martial arts? Or is it better to be a warrior first and then an immortal?

I also wrote a fairy tale based on Wu Qin Xi.

Kill decisively, weld it on the keyboard for me, write quickly

Decisive killing, steady attack, and gradual upgrades are very nice to watch.