Dragon Ball: Starting from the Junior Brother of Kakusenryu
龙珠：从鹤仙流小师弟开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 340k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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253Fans
124Chapters
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It's very low at the beginning. The main character likes to be lazy and doesn't exercise. Later, he cheats and becomes stronger. I can only say that it is interesting to write like this. Doesn't it feel like Moyu is very personal? I am different from others 😒😒😒
What is the role of the protagonist?
It doesn't matter whether the protagonist is useful or not, the plot must be there
After reading Chapter 10, I can only say that what was said in the comment section is correct.
In Chapter 1, he said that he couldn't even learn Wu Kong. In Chapter 2, he was threatened by the Crane Immortal. Later in Chapter 5, he said that the protagonist was talented but just lazy. Comparing Chapter 1 with Chapter 5, I can't tell where your talent lies. Comparing Chapter 2 with Chapter 5, it's even more frustrating. You can't even control your own life. Not only do you not practice cultivation, you also have to be greedy for money. In Chapter 10, in order to create conflict, Yamcha, who had washed his hands in a golden basin, revolted temporarily.
Crane Immortal and Turtle Immortal have a lifelong rivalry
Crane Sento and Kame Sennin, two brothers, had a rivalry when they were young. Later, Piccolo was born and brought disaster to the world. Crane Sento was afraid of Piccolo's power and thought that martial arts could not save the world, so he gave up on himself. In fact, if it weren't for the knowledge in Dragon Ball, Tao Tao died in vain at the hands of Wukong. He would not target Turtle Immortal and Wukong like this. You can say that Crane Immortal is bad, but he will not be cowardly in front of big issues of right and wrong, especially in front of Piccolo. After all, he has been cowardly all his life and even harmed Piccolo!
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What is written here?
The dozen or so chapters are all anecdotes, and the protagonist is not only useless, but also has no sense of existence. He said he had talent and understanding, but he turned out to be a pure lazy person. People who don't want to practice cultivation have left this Dragon Ball world to be greedy for money and start a business.
Why doesn't a protagonist with this kind of personality go to the cat next door?
It really has nothing but the halo of the protagonist, which is super unlikable.
I feel good. At least there will be changes beyond the protagonist in the future. It won't be boring to fight monsters and upgrade. The protagonist doesn't have a strong aura either.
The plot arrangement is very good among Dragon Ball fans, I look forward to the follow-up 🙂
I still can't imagine how Pig's Knuckle can defeat Beerus.
Keep up the good work, I hope the future is not under the protagonist's control
The position is eleventh, excluding the starting point official
Is there a female protagonist? Is it the 18th?
I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 3
My name is Tang Yuan. . . . . .
Will Sun Wukong have his tail cut off by the gods?