Gou Cheng Martial Saint: Start with Mountain Breaking Fist

Is what you wrote reasonable? My sister-in-law's writing is so beautiful. At this age and her family is incompetent, she has been snatched away long ago.

An ordinary apprentice who has just become a master can stimulate fluctuations in qi and blood just by being taught a posture and listening to a few words? What the hell is this martial arts training? The power of energy and blood transmitted from the earth is purely "the power of my thinking", okay. The author did not even sort out a system when writing the book. He wrote whatever he thought of, without any logic, and he wanted to inherit the writing methods of Ming Jin and An Jin. The division was serious. A martial arts gym that was in recession and almost no one went to it had only five new apprentices. As a result, two had first-class qualifications and three had second-class qualifications, including one (protagonist).

The same routine as the beginning of other books

How could a chaotic society with low productivity produce so many warriors? The underlying economic base determines the high-rise buildings. A safe environment, a large population, and a good economy can support enough talents.

Asked about other authors. Also ask you. Author: Your father and your second uncle are cousins? So the protagonist in the book and his cousin are also cousins, so they are called Lao Ciao? Or cousins ​​with the same surname? Can the author tell me where this cousin came from?

Can you have some logic? Is the male protagonist a B-level guy or an A-level guy? Earlier, we talked about the roots and fruits in the second class. Your sentences don't make any sense. Haven't you learned Chinese yet? Don't know what to write for you? As a result, this system was still recommended to me. Really convinced.

You can actually beat three chapters in a fist fight. Extremely speechless. Three chapters haven't been finished yet.

Shennong couldn't hold on any longer! Lift it down

What the hell is it like to recognize your parents everywhere as soon as you travel through time? It's so hard to guess.

I've read so many martial arts articles, and I don't know why. I can't stand you the most. I feel like there are too many flaws. It's better to have success than not to have success. It's too lame.

There are a lot of poison points, and the basic character relationships will be wrong. I don't think a normal person's handwritten text would have such a weird plot.

I was really speechless after reading these two chapters. When do you need water? Real water

The signature has been approved and you can invest (I don't know if I can complete the process today, or if I can't, it will have to be next week 😥)

The conflict was created too deliberately, mindlessly and unnaturally.

For those who learn martial arts, God will reward their hard work. The protagonist is either a hunter or a fisherman.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

Why is this protagonist hunting? Don't you want any meat supplements? The old man has insufficient Qi and blood. He has insufficient Qi and blood! Could it be that except in the martial arts school, can I eat his father's meat? You know your qi and blood are insufficient, but you still don't replenish it? What is this hunting for?

Is this protagonist too useless? We can't eat meat at home! Isn't it possible to eat in the mountains? ? ? And eat Guanyin soil! Is this what Orion got?

System flow must be enjoyable to watch, not cowardly, decisive in killing, revenge secretly even if you have grudges, write well in the early stage to attract readers, and you can write better if you have more people's suggestions. If you continue on this track, then go for it, and I hope the work will sell well 🙂