
Three Hundred Years, Long River Crossing
三百载,长河渡
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 178k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Jin-Sui-Tang Dynasties
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I took a rough look and made some suggestions The biggest problem is the plot. At present, it seems that there is basically no main line. Overall, it gives people the feeling of expanding the history book. There is still a lot to be done in this time period in the early Eastern Jin Dynasty. It is recommended to add a protagonist to follow the hegemony style or the celebrity style like Langya. Then there is the narrative, which is too scattered, with a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. The reading experience is not good. Some transitions can be added to smooth it out. The second is the characters, which are relatively flat and difficult to leave an impression on people. In addition, there are too many characters appearing, so there is a certain reading threshold Finally, I have a little suggestion. You can divide some long paragraphs into several smaller paragraphs for easier reading. Above