Douluo Is the Best in the Tang Dynasty, Waiting for Death to Go Against Fate

It looks like it's easy to do, it's like the detailed outline is just moved out, and many things are not written in detail for the reader to think about. For example, when fighting Wang Dong, my sister and Huo Yuhao suddenly watched the battle together, or the two sisters' soul rings didn't explain what kind of soul beast they were. There was also something wrong with the layout and it was very tiring to read. Is there something wrong with the upper and lower sentences of the apprenticeship?

The plot is very difficult to explain in one sentence. Is the author feeling sorry for robbing Wang Dong and planning to give his sister to someone else? In the plot, it looks like my sister has fallen in love with Huo Yuhao (￢_￢)

How can I put it this way? The front part is fine, but sometimes it feels a bit confusing later on, and some events are skipped over lightly, which is a bit confusing, and sometimes it's so confusing that it feels like there's something missing between the two chapters.

The connection and transition between words needs to be strengthened. Only read a few chapters. But it obviously feels like the text is not smooth enough. From time to time the reader will feel like the gears are getting stuck. It's like taking a car to see the scenery along the road. If you want to enjoy the scenery immersed in it, the violent bumps will make you feel uneasy. But the growth of this is a matter of time and effort. I'm afraid it will be difficult to practice even in a short while.

I would like to ask readers for any thoughts and opinions, the behavior of the protagonist, plug-ins, the design of soul rings and soul bones, etc., Etc., Or whether you like a certain plot or the character plot.