The Sun and the Moon Are Both Wrong, Why Is This Timeline Wrong?

Name: The Sun and the Moon Are Both Wrong, Why Is This Timeline Wrong?
Author: The First and Fifteenth Day of the Lunar Month

日月同错，这时间线怎么不对劲啊

by The First and Fifteenth Day of the Lunar Month (初一又十五)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 45k Words
Genre: Light Novel
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Fan Fiction
Updated: 2mo ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

Good news: time travel Bad news: How come the sun and the moon are both wrong? Worse news: Why are we about to be wiped out at the beginning? Even worse news: Gao Haoguang is missing Traveling through the sun and moon, Huang Erguo was in the same place, but the timeline was skewed to grandma's house. No, I have to find the bright light and correct the timeline. Three True Circles, fusion and upgrade, senior, please lend me your power. Look at my sword of residual light from all directions, its true form is like a sword, it has returned to its original state, it is the sacred palm of Brahma, the wrathful lotus of the Buddha, it changes life at the same time, it is the eternal Mingzi, it is divine power, [Multiple anime characters, multiple anime elements]

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How should I put it? The shortcomings are obvious.
The rhythm of the plot is too jumpy and too fast. From the beginning, I really wanted to talk about it, but I always failed to explain one thing clearly and went to work on another thing. Furthermore, you haven't figured out the logic of the plot, and you can't convince the readers of Sun and Moon that the talisman was begged by Haoguang, and 100% of its power was brought by Haoguang's future body. But your system hasn't been bound yet, so why can't you use it seamlessly? If the logic behind it doesn't make sense, it would be more reasonable for you to just parachute into the system.
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