The Fourth Natural Disaster in the World of Cultivation, I Established the Immortal Immortal Sect

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This type is not easy to write, so keep it first, 🙂

Can you tell me about the problem with this book? I was not attracted by your strange identity, I was simply a reader of this subject, and I found it through search. I searched for books three times last time and saw that you were not added. At that time, your grades were too poor, and the content was too little. Later content came up. After reading it for a while, I thought your book was really weird. Do you think your innovation was very successful, right? I traveled through time and again, but I thought your character design was really weird, and then it felt more like a few elementary school students, and then the character had a sudden sense of fragmentation... Then in terms of full effect, I only looked at the first few pictures, and I put them on the bookshelf and abandoned them. I just wanted to see how long you can update them, but I can only say that when you choose the fourth talent, you must have good creativity and the ability to control the group portraits. Many times we read this book not for the protagonist, but for the group portraits of the players. However, your fragmented character design cannot create the feeling of the fourth natural disaster...

One by one, time-travelers encounter major events after time-traveling, and are finally dragged into this "game". As a result, they are struggling here. This game is too real. Is it a bit too real?

I have invested in development🤓🤓

War criminal 4016 emerges! 😁

It's too fragmented. A few people use the same terms as primary school students. They don't see the characteristics of time travelers who have experienced so much. After experiencing so much, they are still jumping up and down. Damn, damn, crap.

Read to the latest chapter at 06.30. At present, the whole story is quite interesting, and the design of the entire sect and the surrounding environment is quite interesting. I also want to slowly decipher it as the protagonist group explores. The biggest problem is the writing style. The sense of immersion is too poor, and the gap between it and the first book is huge. As I read it, I felt like I was watching myself in reality in my mind, watching a narration telling the story in the book through my mobile phone. The writing has the feel of a hobbyist just starting out in the industry. I hope the author can find his own writing style soon. A good story setting should not be dragged down by a regressed writing style.

After reading it, the beginning was a bit bland and there were no flaws. I hope there will be some insights later. The theme is a bit new. I don't know if I can control it.

Why is it a squid again😰

It is understandable if the data is not easy to cut, but there is no point in opening one book and cutting another to become a eunuch general If it is to generate electricity for love, I will advise you to stick to it, after all, I have not encountered the problem of CAV But in order to make money, bad data is a terminal disease, the kind that has no cure, a mortal has written more than two hundred free chapters to become popular, but not every author It's all forgotten words I can only suggest you to go out for a walk and relax, accumulate more materials, prepare more before starting the book, prepare the outline and materials, etc. It's not easy to find a book that suits your appetite, but it ends like this. Maybe you have more regrets than me Take it seriously, see you again if we have the chance, and wish the next book a good sale and a smooth completion!

Write well, brother, don't let interference mess up your routine, just come here with the same old vest.

Although it is very impolite to discuss another author in the community of one author, I still have to make some suggestions for improvement: Regarding the development of the world view, the most comfortable thing I have seen so far is the content in Mao Ni's "Jiang Ye" where Ning Que asked Lu Qingchen to learn from it, and the world view was revealed through a dialogue between the two. The most rigorous thing is that Sword of Dawn builds up the world view step by step from the basics through a large number of chapters. Of course, these two are the top masters of Qidian. It is definitely difficult for the author to directly imitate these two, but I hope you can take a look. I hope it will be helpful to your subsequent writing. I don't know much about cheats or systems. Regarding the description of some information on the sect panel, I will also list an example here: The description of various props in Zhai Nan's "Mystery·Pathway of Paradox" should be able to give the author some help in writing. In the latest chapter that was updated at noon today, the content of the changes in the sect's panel has been listed very dryly, and it has been repeated through the protagonist's mouth. It is just to describe the protagonist's psychological activities in one or two sentences. It is unnecessary. The changes in the sect's panel can be brought out through the description of the protagonist's mental activities, and the content will be much tighter. At present, the latest chapter really doesn't have much content to read. If there is a requirement to update the word count, I still recommend combining it into one, condensing the article, and updating it once a day. Once it's on the shelves and the quality is still the same, it will be difficult to retain readers.

Looking forward to players returning to the original world and pretending to be x in the face 😜

Apart from the shortcoming of not having a sword bone, his current body is actually more suitable for the way of the sword than his original god! "Original God" should be "original body", right? Also, is the author's input method exposed, although I don't play it

The amount is too small, and it's a bit painful to catch up immediately 😭

Personally, I don't like "official plug-ins" mainly because of the system type. The main reason is that the system is difficult to integrate into the worldview system. Some authors will cleverly design certain entities in the worldview system into "systems" to make the entire story reach a more complete level in terms of plot design and worldview setting. If the existence of the "system" is just a system from beginning to end, as an existence that distributes benefits to the protagonist and advances the plot, it will seem a bit emmm and dry. Although the former will be much more difficult, and the latter can also achieve some results as long as the author can produce stories stably, but as a reader, I still want to see the author produce better works. Admittedly, this will make the author more painful in the countless coding time. It is just my selfishness as a reader and an old fan 🙂. It is already late tonight to support the new book. Let's go to the third chapter first. I will take a closer look tomorrow.

Recommended from Squid, I like the subject matter I have invested! Looking forward to putting it on the shelves and ordering thousands of orders!

At the moment, writing about the construction of the sect is a bit boring. The dialogue is full of jokes and jokes, which makes me unable to laugh. I feel like giving up, but I feel that if this subject matter can be used, it will be a good source of food. It is suggested that the stories of the four players' respective worlds can be strengthened, and the depth of the characters can be enhanced. To show the heroine's wisdom, the prompts can be strengthened in her world instead of suddenly becoming a god. Unfortunately, only two players' stories have been seen so far, and the images of the other two are very weak.

The author, is it Gu Duxun or Lonely Xun? Lonely Search appears in both Wedge and Chapter 6