Who Will Be the Trouble After They Have All Transformed?

When did the male channel come along with the female channel? Is the author just here to gain territory?

It finally started to feel cool. The author's foreshadowing in the early stage is too depressing, and I feel like I am looking at the moderator and it is completely evil. It is estimated that most readers were dissuaded by the early stage. If you set it up nicely, it will appear in the first three chapters. It is estimated that there will be many left. In addition, the writing style is good and it reads smoothly.

I can barely accept being transformed into a sea queen or a furnace, but I am speechless if my original body was manipulated at will... I think the transformation story has a virgin complex, because I treat the heroine as my wife. Obviously it is written in the book that Yan Zhuo's appearance is the male protagonist's strike zone before traveling through time. If you say this, I don't understand why it is set like this. Just to show the world view? But for the world view, this is a setting that doesn't matter if it exists or not. Its existence can only disgust people like me.

Hopefully it will be finished

It feels like I'm halfway through writing it. The starting point is that I can only accept a light hundred at most. If I really want to write it, it's best to accept the fact that it will only be read by a dozen readers.

Where did you come from? Is this still the starting point?

Only over 100 orders per day? ! At present, including me, it's 111? I like this protagonist very much. The author should not die. How did you get along? Are you from another station? The writing is okay, and I've smoothed out the plot a bit, but it's just that you don't speak human words well? There are places where I can guess, and there are places where there are just too many possibilities. The characterizations are all very good. After just a cursory glance, I can remember a few people. If it becomes broken, it will become broken. It doesn't matter. Author, please think about it a bit and provide some more foreshadowing in the free chapters. I'm so angry. How bad are the characters in other novice novels? Apart from character creation, everything else you do is just by the wayside! Let me praise the protagonist. Motivated, not pretentious, speaks human words, decisive, optimistic, positive, ambitious, a little bit kind, knows sense of proportion and boundaries, and has a tough mentality that doesn't matter if it breaks. It's not like the other little girl mentality that I've seen that transforms into Wen Luoli. I can clearly feel the charm of the male and female protagonists. In conclusion, if you want to write it, write it carefully for me. Your background, setting, structure, coolness, and character relationships are all a mess. I even suspect that you will cut up the book soon. I didn't expect that the person who wrote it was the eunuch. If you are here, please give me the correct letter. My money does not come from the strong wind.

Needless to say if you don't want to, in today's novels, whether it's a more popular male protagonist novel or a novel of this type, it's not difficult to give a female character an identity, it only takes a few sentences. (In a sense, this is also a matter of not being able to go down) . But being unable to go down means that since you are not given the status of the master of change, you are even being exploited and given benefits. It would be better to go further and directly let the protagonist have clear experiences and make it clear that those encounters have had an irreversible impact on the protagonist. . Whether the protagonist becomes careless about intercourse and acts recklessly under the extreme influence of the body, or whether he still chooses to stick to the bottom line under such a strong influence, it is much more interesting than the current situation of neither going up nor down. . But the protagonist's current suppression of physical pleasure can be overcome in just one or two sentences. The former is just feeding stones, while the latter has no hindrance. It is too smooth and unattractive. . When I first read the first copy, I thought I would actually experience it, but it turned out not to be the case. After seeing the second copy, I found that the protagonist had a deep memory of the experience. I thought that the third copy would directly experience it, but it turned out that he didn't. So I won't be looking forward to the third time. . As for the impact of the body on the consciousness, it is probably a rare advantage. It does write about the impact of the body on the protagonist's consciousness. . But it is still only a matter of one or two sentences. At present, it does not have a big impact on the protagonist's behavior, and it still has not much to do with whether the protagonist is in love or not. . As for plot parts such as the main plot... They are tasteless, so they are discarded.

This is really not a male channel transformation article. Maybe it's up to the moderator. You might as well write it on the moderator.

I should write more about things in the real world. I've been diving deep into the world and there's no main plot anymore.

Although I read Transformation, after reading hundreds of Transformation books, I really feel that this is the logic of a female channel, and this book should be released on a female channel.

The worldview at the beginning was really good, but the second time I entered the subterranean writing, I was incomprehensible. The protagonist and the author suddenly seemed to have been eroded in reverse. I didn't know what I was doing after more than ten chapters. I need to polish it.

Is there a group? Is there any extra? When you write a book on this platform, you always feel like you haven't written everything, and a lot of content is missing 🙂

Many chapters are written in a mess, and some of the inner activities are also inexplicable. If I am not good at writing, I can write more clearly while driving.

I came back after more than half a month and found that there are more than 50 chapters. You are the author👍🏻 Getting back to the topic, there are a lot of transformation articles written in the Eight Classics of Classics, but many of them are equivalent to playing games to open a female account. It would be good to include some post content This book basically describes the process of change and adaptation brought about by gender and social status, and And against Shen He, he has always insisted on sex, and there are also small details of emotion and action in many places. To be honest, it has also captured the most beautiful essence of the female channel. This is the essence and most attractive part of Bianwen The author sometimes does not have too much bad taste, I believe that all male readers will also accept it Of course, the premise is not too much. From the current point of view, it should be restrained in the future. The only thing that can be called poisonous is that the first world was raped at the end, and the body in the original world was broken, but those who can still eat it probably won't care. Here are some personal complaints: First point, the transition is indeed a bit messy. , Many times, the heroine's psychology, default narration, and objective description can appear at the same time, which has an impact, but not that big, but it does need to be looked at carefully, and for me, it has a slight impact on the smoothness. The second point, the time of the third wear, I don't know how you understand it. But I feel like it's just too long. Although it can be seen from the introduction, the third time is more important. It most likely involves the entire world view, plus the essence of the heroine's abilities. But from a visual point of view, the presence of the main world is very low. The world of cultivating immortals cannot be said to be dragging, but it is not very refreshing. The most important point is that the heroine's deep dive cannot be interrupted. It is different from the traditional simulator type. The advantage is that a complete immersion will be strong, but the disadvantage is that it is easy to be top-heavy.

After watching the beginning, the protagonist and background were too dark. It would be better if it was sunny

Can the author give an accurate estimate of whether my current body is a piece of shit? ? 😡

Readability is getting worse...

The way of writing is too feminine, and the beats are too fast, and I don't know what I'm writing in a trance.

The plot is always lacking, the continuity is terrible, a little bit here and there, a little bit here and there. After watching it for so long, the main plot still doesn't advance, and the side quests are a mess.

The author's writing is too out-of-the-box. There must be at least some transitions between time, place and scene, otherwise it will be very tiring and you won't want to read it after a long time.

Too much white space is used, and it feels like most of the time the storyline can only be guessed. If you can't match the author's airwaves, you'll be confused.

I finished reading it in one day. It was quite interesting. The plot seems very jumpy, but in fact it is still connected logically. It is not suitable for reading at a glance. After scanning for a few pages, I can't understand it. I just don't like the part where the original body was mentioned by J Shark. It would be better if it can be deleted.

A. Change single B. Change hundreds C. Change marriage

Ah, I saw the latest one right away, so I have to catch up again slowly.

It's a bit magical. It's the first time I've seen this. It's pretty cool.

The heroine's characterization is very good. The supporting characters are also very good. The background setting is perfunctory. The settings are okay and the writing is good. The author is full of bad taste. Do I want to fight the radio waves with you by jumping around? The preposition is omitted, the postposition is omitted, and there is no explanation at all. Part of it is just my guess. If the author takes the right path, his character creation can kick other novices to death, but other aspects are too bad. Summary: I would be happy to watch it without spending money just because the heroine is still there. If I spend money, I would hesitate.

I didn't feel it at first, but the more I looked at it, the more familiar it became.