Peninsula: Starting by Winning Over a Female Idol After Getting Drunk

The card king is amazing!

Little sun!

At first, I thought I would struggle with Taeyeon who was 13 years old, but ended up sleeping with Pani and then kissing Taeyeon, which is a bit hard to judge.

Kim Taeyeon is understandable, but people like Yoon-ah, Sunny, and Bae Joo-hyun only met once, and then they became like friends for many years. Also, why don't we go back in time to 13 years? Girls' Generation's 25-year-old Bae Joo-hyun is not interesting, and the day lily is cold. If I want to write, it must be written about 13 years.

The fishing god is here!

13-Year-old Jin Xiaoguo

If you have any questions or suggestions, please tell me below~

Do you have any suggestions for the recent plot? This is my first book, and the plot writing is really immature, so the results are basically unsatisfactory. I don't usually have any comments, so I only write in a single machine, thinking that at least I can't be a eunuch. Today I wanted to ask you if you have any good suggestions. I have been preparing a new book recently and am planning to double-release it. If you have any good suggestions, you can tell me directly, or you can join the group to chat directly!

It has been a month since I planned to write this book. Because this is the first book for a newcomer, I look at the background data anxiously every day, and now I want to say something. First point: Regarding the setting of this book, there are indeed many time-travel flows, so I can only try to make it more interesting in some small settings. At present, the line of time-travel is slowly unfolding, so you can look forward to it. Second point, there are some parts of this book that I took for granted when I wrote it. When I only read it before, I always wondered why the authors wrote this way. Now that I have started using it, I know how difficult it is. It is difficult to find some problems by myself, so I need your feedback so that I can know how to write it later. Third point, the latest has been recommended, so I am very grateful for your support of follow-up reading, monthly tickets and recommendation tickets. However, the data has indeed dropped seriously every day, but there is no feedback, so I don't know what to do. If you can, you can leave a comment with your suggestions, or join the book club and tell me directly. Thank you all. Point 4: The heroine issue. The characters with labels on the character cards are all heroines, but her line has not been advanced yet. If I advance rashly, some people will scold me. After thinking about it, I am really a little anxious, so I currently plan to follow the original plan and try not to appear inconsistent. Point 5: This is my first book, and I will definitely finish it. No matter whether I plan to open a new book or something later, I will definitely finish this book. Although this book is still very immature, I still want to finish it well.

Thank you for your willingness to point out my problems. Instead of leaving directly, you are willing to leave comments and point out my problems. I am very grateful As for some of the current questions, I have seen that there are generally replies. The previous plot is indeed a bit abrupt in some places. I did not grasp the rhythm in the first time and the heroines came on stage too fast. I will pay attention to this later. I will adjust the rhythm and plot without affecting my own plans. I hope you all enjoy watching it and you are welcome to comment!