Douluo Peerless: the Sun and Moon Twins, Marrying a Wife in the World of Mortals

The author has written this subject quite well, but I feel that the pace of the narrative is a bit too fast, and many of them are written in one stroke. I am a little worried about how many words I can write, and the part where the protagonist goes to Shrek to be an exchange student feels really redundant. From the perspective of Douluo Three Kingdoms (I subscribed to the later ones but haven't finished them yet), the protagonist is a royal genius with twin martial souls with extreme attributes. The Three Kingdoms now hope to find a genius with extreme attributes to compete with the sun and the moon. , The identity of the protagonist has also been made clear and cannot be won over. Even if Shrek does not dare to kill the protagonist openly, it is absolutely impossible to cultivate the protagonist carefully. What is the meaning of the protagonist becoming an exchange student? If he does not hide his talent and quickly cultivate to the title, and go to Shrek to show his face in front of Tang San, does the protagonist think that if Mu En does not kill him, Xuanzi and Yan Shaozhe will not suddenly have a shocking wisdom and kill him. After all, the protagonist is currently exposed to the ultimate attribute, a hundred thousand years of life. , It is clear that the ten-year-old soul sect with a hundred thousand year old soul bone can play a decisive role in the Three Kingdoms War. If he does not fulfill his talent quickly, no one in Sun and Moon would dare to take action and expose himself to everyone's eyes under Shrek. The status of both exchange students is not equal. Sun and Moon have sent the hopes of their younger generation. Shrek has taken pictures of several students who have average talent and are definitely not up to the talent of the protagonist. Shrek said that he wants Shrek As for Gram's training system, can't you just wait until the students come back to learn it? Do you insist on going to Shrek to grab the toilet? Moreover, many small details have not been set up, and there is no end to why the protagonist has level 15 innate soul power (at first I thought a small flaw could be solved, but later it seemed uncomfortable, and I always felt that the protagonist's IQ was worrying). Now I can clearly praise the author for not suppressing the level, but it is really difficult to understand that he has exposed all his trump cards.

Your introduction is a bit inconsistent with the content. The introduction is really like brothers and friends, but the text is "brothers and friends are respectful"

The author should be more careful. Two chapters a day is not enough.

Why do I feel like this novel has a beginning?

Except for the information, the protagonist does not feel like a time traveler. In addition, the timeline feels a bit confusing.