Kingdom Come Deliverance, but Warhammer 40K

I read more than 20 chapters, and I felt so frustrated. To be honest, there was nothing very attractive about it.

It's about the source and strength of the protagonist's plug-in. I was disgusted by a group of hammers who boasted that all the golden fingers were Tzeentch in disguise.

The author is amazing. In the 40k universe, the protagonist, Goldfinger, is the Kingdom of Heaven's salvation system. He uses medieval gadgets as Goldfinger in the Warhammer universe where stars can break at every turn. In addition, the cheat was also discovered. The whole person is basically a Tzeentch doll. I can't understand what is written. Please avoid lightning.

When you write a Warhammer fanfic, no one likes to see the protagonist being tortured. Basically, they like to see the protagonist cheat and save the world. Obviously the god in your picture is the boss behind the protagonist. It can be a cool article, but you want the protagonist to be played by the four gods. What does it mean? If you like Wenqing, you will only cut books in the end

This Thalia feels like Slaanesh's vest, but why does your Slaanesh smell like "Alice"? It also looks a bit like the green bug in black soul...

There's something there, but it's too stream-of-consciousness to understand.

I really didn't expect that there is such a market for pornographic articles nowadays.

I feel that most of the Warhammer novels make the Four Gods too awesome and the Emperor too weak. The Four Gods are powerful subspace creatures that feed on emotions. The main reason is that there are too many psychic creatures in the galaxy and they are too full. Otherwise, how could the Emperor steal twenty-one origins from the warp and give each of his Primarchs one? Not to mention that in reality, the four gods teamed up to hammer the Emperor into the toilet. If the Webway hadn't been blown up enough, the Emperor would have been half dead.

I just read the first 20 chapters and let me tell you straight away, don't write like this if you don't win the lottery.

Have you seen too much of Tao Weird Fairy? As for your writing style, just give up.

The author probably wanted to write a fundamentalist novel like Blade of the Empire with some minor twists. This is not a big problem, but the overall plot direction has too little positive feedback. Don't talk about more in the later period, it is useless. If you don't have much positive feedback in the early stage of a book, you won't be able to retain many people. In the early stage of Imperial Blade, there is a plot of unparalleled killings (Interstellar). As a result, Henry was arrested as soon as he landed, and was played by the four gods. Coupled with the Riddler style that the author wants to write about being 'fateful' in subspace and 'Salia', the entire early plot is like a dark ball of yarn, boring and irritating.

The writing is so obscure that at first glance it looks like a toy chosen by the four gods. . .

The protagonist of "Good Mother-in-Law" made me addicted to cheating!

Dislike. I have read a lot of hammer articles, but I still feel a little bit literary when I read this one. The various hallucinations and other things are probably because I want to learn the writing style of Daogui? Dislike

In the timeline of traveling through Bohemia, the illusion of Lan Gugu is also mixed in.

After reading ten chapters, the protagonist only thinks about women. The author also made the plot neurotic. The God-Emperor did not see it. Tzeentch appears frequently. Anyone who reads it feels that the protagonist has been corrupted by Tzeentch. The most outrageous thing is that you know that you are in the Warhammer universe, but you still miss women when you are about to die. Isn't this nonsense? Why don't you quickly pray to return to reality or return to the God Emperor?

The writing is too vague, and the protagonist's subjective initiative is too small, and he is always pushed away. The plug-in has almost no sense of existence, just like a 🐔, the four gods can come in whenever they want. The feeling of refreshment is lacking, and the harvest is almost unfeeling.

I just feel confused. Dream for a while. Sometimes it's fantasy, sometimes it's reality. It also feels like traveling through time. Long Luan Luan

But your introduction has nothing to do with Kingdom Come, nor Warhammer 40k. It seems a bit too BS, so I suggest you change it.

When it comes to plug-ins, in fact, in Warhammer World, melee combat is the majority. Apart from psychic powers, the most powerful one is cold weapon combat, so the system is not as profitable as everyone thinks.

Not bad, I'm quite interested

It was definitely a good job for the author to write Cthulhu. This hammer is still a bit difficult.

You can write other content without replacing the main plot. You can also slow down the rhythm and highlight the role of the golden finger, such as Henry's bane potion and so on.

The writing is good, but it's not enjoyable enough to read. To put it simply, I can't see any improvement in the protagonist. Every time the protagonist improves, it is basically a description of the protagonist's psychological level, or the talent of the Kingdom of Heaven saves the game. I don't think there's anything wrong with the psychological description, but not everyone has played the game Kingdom Come. The sense of immersion is not enough when written like this, and players may not be able to get a sense of satisfaction.

Write for me. If the author is in good health, he will write something good.

Is the protagonist Henry the Messiah born in the Warhammer world? So the system of Kingdom Salvation is the subspace projection of the protagonist, or in other words, he is not without psychic power. The manifestation of his power is the related ability of the game Kingdom of Salvation. The article keeps saying that his kingdom will come. Does this refer to his power in subspace? In the real world, Henry is only a human being with limited power and will age and die. However, Henry in subspace may represent some kind of Catholic concept (Holy Son? Holy Father?). This may mean that when Henry's strength and ability in reality reach a certain threshold, he will link up with the subspace power that represents the salvation of the kingdom of heaven, pull Bohemia-2 out of the subspace (the kingdom comes), and create the kingdom of heaven on earth, using this as a basis to merge with his own subspace essence, and become a demon or a god.

666. The heartthrob of chaos.

I originally wanted to keep it, but I thought I might as well forget it and book it quickly. It's a waste of money. There are also very nice books

Well written, but few updates

This book really relied on black and red to survive. I thought it would be cold by now.