Kingdom Come: Deliverance, but It's Warhammer 40K

The author is amazing. In the 40k universe, the protagonist, Goldfinger, is the Kingdom of Heaven's salvation system. He uses medieval gadgets as Goldfinger in the Warhammer universe where stars can break at every turn. In addition, the cheat was also discovered. The whole person is basically a Tzeentch doll. I can't understand what is written. Please avoid lightning.

It's about the source and strength of the protagonist's plug-in. I was disgusted by a group of hammers who boasted that all the golden fingers were Tzeentch in disguise.

When you write a Warhammer fanfic, no one likes to see the protagonist being tortured. Basically, they like to see the protagonist cheat and save the world. Obviously the god in your picture is the boss behind the protagonist. It can be a cool article, but you want the protagonist to be played by the four gods. What does it mean? If you like Wenqing, you will only cut books in the end

This Thalia feels like Slaanesh's vest, but why does your Slaanesh smell like "Alice"? It also looks a bit like the green bug in black soul...

I really didn't expect that there is such a market for pornographic articles nowadays.

There's something there, but it's too stream-of-consciousness to understand.

I feel that most of the Warhammer novels make the Four Gods too awesome and the Emperor too weak. The Four Gods are powerful subspace creatures that feed on emotions. The main reason is that there are too many psychic creatures in the galaxy and they are too full. Otherwise, how could the Emperor steal twenty-one origins from the warp and give each of his Primarchs one? Not to mention that in reality, the four gods teamed up to hammer the Emperor into the toilet. If the Webway hadn't been blown up enough, the Emperor would have been half dead.

I just read the first 20 chapters and let me tell you straight away, don't write like this if you don't win the lottery.

Have you seen too much of Tao Weird Fairy? As for your writing style, just give up.

The author probably wanted to write a fundamentalist novel like Blade of the Empire with some minor twists. This is not a big problem, but the overall plot direction has too little positive feedback. Don't talk about more in the later period, it is useless. If you don't have much positive feedback in the early stage of a book, you won't be able to retain many people. In the early stage of Imperial Blade, there is a plot of unparalleled killings (Interstellar). As a result, Henry was arrested as soon as he landed, and was played by the four gods. Coupled with the Riddler style that the author wants to write about being 'fateful' in subspace and 'Salia', the entire early plot is like a dark ball of yarn, boring and irritating.