Siheyuan: Beat up He Daqing at the Beginning

. Um. Siheyuan novels that are so literal-minded are also rare. I want to ask, have you ever written fantasy before? Hurry up and change the track

Super poisonous! ! At the beginning, He Yuzhu is traversed, and He Daqing beats Yu Yuzhu for money. The protagonist knows by default that there is no other explanation for the plot of the Siheyuan. The first thing the protagonist does is to put a sack on He Daqing, and then beats the White Widow! Then he ran to the master for no reason and told him that he wanted to buy a bicycle for six-year-old Yu Yu! ! You read that right! ! That's what he wrote! ! The whole text is inexplicably in classical Chinese and in vernacular! It feels like listening to a book! ! He Daqing's completely unreasonable rain-fighting and some inexplicable settings are really poisonous! ! It was definitely written by Ai. Anyone with a little knowledge of Siheyuan would never write it like this! !

In fanfics, you can start writing your own story from a certain time period, and then change it beyond recognition in the first chapter. You must know that most readers who like Siheyuan fanfics have read TV series or original novels. In this way, no matter how good your subsequent writing is, readers will be driven away from the beginning, so it is very important to start a novel well.

What the hell are you writing about? The preface doesn't match the subtitles.

I fed a lot of shit in the first chapter💩💩💩

Yi Zhonghai is not in need of pension, but wants to give up a slave, preferably a slave with a chip in "Swallowing the Stars".

After reading the introduction, I clicked on the author's name and found that there were no works, so I left a message and ran away.

I only read the introduction, and when I saw the scene about running from Hong Kong to Malaysia, I knew this book was useless!

After reading the first chapter, I don't quite understand why the basic settings of the character need to be changed. After all, those who are still willing to watch Siheyuan are those who have at least watched the TV series or similar novels, and want to see if the plot and story can be written with new ideas, rather than changing the basic characters. Once the character design changed, I no longer felt it when I read it.

First gain a foothold and acquire skills, then stay away from right and wrong and choose a quiet place to settle down, and then bring order to the chaos and promote Jia Jiale to be happy. But the cat in the picture is sweating and sighing. Why? Do you want to speak freely or be cautious in your words and deeds... Like or criticize It's time to go to bed, I feed dog food every day to be stable, 😴

Rebirth (Information Advantage) + State Banquet Chef (Skill Advantage) Even this is not enough and you have to provide cheats... What a weak person this is.

I just looked at one and I was already poisoned and died.

It was very annoying to watch people chewing words, so I retreated 😅

I can't stand it any more. I can't stand it without thinking. It's so poisonous.