Under One Person: I Am Not Without Roots!

It may also be that my understanding of the protagonist is different from what the author wanted to write. I will only share what I thought after reading it. Up to Chapter 16, the protagonists I have seen are "sincerity" and "truth". "Sincerity" is the attitude towards everything in the world, and "truth" means not concealing one's own purpose and behavior; But starting from chapter 16, the sense of separation comes: One , The sexual power of the protagonist was emphasized before, but the protagonist chose to "hid it" to enter Qingwei, which is equivalent to overthrowing the previous self, and only seeking "results" (the chapters are too few, and I don't know why I am so anxious. It's a good start, and I will continue to wait and see for the rest of the story). 2. After the author used the words of Quan Xing and several people to describe the protagonist's view of "True Quan Xing", Quan Xing, a selfish and self-care outlaw maniac, would actually accept a "rootless" who uses "concealment" to get "results" and is not "sincere". Will a group of 800 savvy people really believe in this "rootless"? I like to read one-person fanfics because I really like the core of one-person fanfics, but there are too few good one-person fanfics. In fact, many fanfics have good settings, but they all start to lose control at the beginning. I hope the author will work hard and write more exciting stories later.

It looks okay, but the plot of being misunderstood really makes people feel sick and uncomfortable. I should find a solution as soon as possible. If this problem is delayed until it is released, I will really not be in the mood to subscribe 😥

Keep it up, there are other books that will pick up women much better once you go down the mountain.

Isn't the conflict with the Zhuge family too deliberate? Without communicating with other forces in the circle, they just start fighting and fighting alone is suspected of being the leader of Quanxing.

As I said before, you are upright and frank, but it turns out that when you go to the Zhengxing sect, you conceal information and ask stranger Quanxing for help when making materials Quanxing helps you because you are like a rootless person. If you accept help, you are tainted by other people's karma. To put it bluntly, you are already half Quanxing When you go to the Qingwei sect, you still conceal it. News, tell people directly that I was born with no roots or was raised as a homosexual (Li Muxuan). I really can't give up the kindness of others' upbringing, but I still have to learn. You can accept me or not.

It is the 1% of people who make 99% of the voices. The author's ears are too soft. Is the work good? You will know it yourself if you look at the data. It's strange that you don't listen to the editor when it comes to revising the outline, but you listen to the readers.

The writing is good and has the feeling of spiritual cultivation, but the front and back feel a bit disconnected. In the front, there is a sense of quietness and inaction just for the purpose of seeking the Tao. Ye Cheng, starting from a fake identity as a novice, cannot be considered sincere. Later, he started to be a good teacher and lead people to seek the Tao without roots.

It's a bit interesting. The most important thing is that the protagonist is a seeker of truth, not a star-chaser.

I was confused in the first chapter. I am the first person to compare the white-eyed wolf to sincerity 🙂

The character of the protagonist is not a time traveler. I don't really like it if I put it on Wu Gensheng. The author really likes the character of Wu Gensheng. When Wu Gensheng was born, he was reincarnated into him.

The front is good, but the back is sluggish. It feels g-shaped. It's still difficult to find fans who maintain the quality.

This disgusting way of writing and disgusting plot These actions are simply impossible I have never seen anyone kill someone like this for real criminals

Why did you go to Quanzhen Longmen and not enter Quanzhen into Qingwei? What's the difference between both being Taoist? If you want to cultivate your life, wouldn't the inner alchemy method be better? If you don't learn to reverse the eight directions before and learn from the Liuku Immortal Thief, you don't understand it. They are all techniques, nothing more than strength and weakness. Reversing the eight directions is not a bad method, right?

The period of studying abroad felt very awkward. I knew that it was about establishing relationships with foreign countries, supplementing my identity through transition, and settling the company's troubles. But it's still very watery. It gives the protagonist a bunch of benefits without detailed description. This is probably the same as deus ex machina, and worse than cheating.

Changing the outline is inherently inferior to others. Only a few people can finish it, okay? It's normal to change yourself to death over and over again. The most important thing is that it's useless if you change it. You should have run away long ago. How many people have already run away after seeing the first version of the plot, how can they give you a second chance? Just bite the bullet and write, it's all right anyway, if you're willing to write there will be an audience, it's just a small number, as a fan, just finish what you want to write and then it's gone. If you really want to commercialize it, it must be original. If you are a fan, just consider whether you will be happy or not.

The idea is good, and the writing is good, but the plot is a bit outrageous. If the protagonist's practice is to become an immortal, he should first write around the Dharma couple's wealth and land. You can't have one character in the front and another character in the back. Do you really write him as if he has no roots? Make a big personality change?

Can this kill the corpse? If external force can also kill corpses and practice Samadhi True Fire, then the practice is useless.

Don't keep me guys waiting in vain. So far, the plot is okay. If you decide, please let me know.

If you don't have 4,000 words a day, you won't be on the new book list. If you can't keep up with reading, you won't get results, so you have to cut it. So interrupting updates is equivalent to the eve of cutting off the book... If you have a conscience, update intermittently, if you have no conscience, just interrupt. Is it bubbling to declare existence like this without any intention. There is a very small chance that I will continue to write and continue to write. If I can't write for three days, I will ask for leave or disappear directly. The reason why I didn't write it... Either there is something really wrong, or I am just lazy. The former accounts for the minority and the latter accounts for the majority. Comprehensive summary... It is understandable to ask for leave once, but it is guaranteed to apply for leave in succession, sometimes sooner or later. I asked for leave during the new book period, 10% of the time, and I was not even willing to upload chapters with the same content. I first updated 4,000 words every day, and then used the wrong upload yesterday as the reason why I only saw it today. I wrote 8,000 words, revised the previous ones, and kept updating daily. The author is so hateful! To deceive my feelings as a sincere reader.

What the hell is written later? It's all off topic.

I think there are no problems with the plot up to this point. It's not bad. If you cut it, please give me an accurate answer and don't make me wait in vain for your update.

It's a very interesting novel. How can I cut it? 😥

It looks pretty good, wow! ! !

The future of this book is worrying. Does the author have no outline?

Cut it? Please give me some accurate words 🙂

Remember when you can't go any further, that's when you practice!

As long as the author continues to use mystical skills, ten meters and two are no match for you, the author.