Shrouding the Heavens: This System Seems Off

The protagonist was poorly portrayed. He was timid and arrogant when he was not dead. He claimed that he had gone out to look for opportunities to break through to level 4, but in fact he did not dare to put on his stone clothes and go to Zishan to get the Heavenly Book of Origin. After he was dead, he was reckless and arrogant towards his subordinates, but when facing Ye Fan, he still cared about his future life and showed no magnanimity at all. When casting the weapon, I was reluctant to part with the old weapon and had no confidence in the sword. (Taihuang: The sword is not good?) He looked like a man who was not firm on his own path. He made a seal with no imperial inscriptions but the title of the Heavenly Emperor Seal. I think it is quite appropriate to use the evidence before and think about it later to make people laugh.

This book is really exhausting to read, from beginning to end there are small and old characters, a bunch of original small characters

How can a person leave such a mark? Does the original work have such a setting? Ye Fan has provoked so many people and he has never encountered it. Or am I remembering it wrong?

I don't know how to put it, the Holy Son doesn't even have a protector when he goes out? What kind of holy place is this? A genius disciple from a small family always sticks to someone else when going out to avoid being exposed. You are already a saint and run a single gang by yourself?

The protagonist's weapon is sometimes called the Chen-Zhan Sword and sometimes the Soul-Zhan Sword. I'm speechless.

Personally, I think the current 10 chapters are still very good. Except for some problems with the plot, they are already better than most fan works, and it can be said that the future is promising. As long as the system rewards from other worlds are collected in the future, and there is no common problem in fan works that only focus on physical fitness and scriptures, judging from the current pace, the quality will not be bad. Everyone in the world of cultivation should be like a dragon. As long as there is a foundation for cultivation, in theory everyone can reach the end. Most people don't make it to the end because they are lacking in some aspect. And every path in this world can come to an end, and the creators of most scriptures just failed. But there is no such problem with the cheating protagonist, so it would be pointless to plan the Emperor Scripture. After all, 99% of fan works are about planning and practicing the Emperor's Scripture, as if plug-ins are not as high-grade as the Emperor's Scripture. Every time I see this kind of plot, I feel a strong sense of violation. There is also the issue of special physiques. Although the world seems to value special physiques, in fact, after reading the original work, it is clear that Ye Fan and Ruen Ren study this because they have no way forward. If they know how to become an immortal, they may not necessarily study the physical route. They should study how to transform and survive the next life. If the time traveler knows the plot, he should not take the physical route. This is a common problem in fan works. The setting of this world is very broad and colorful. But most fan works only focus on those physiques and imperial scriptures, as if without these, the cheating time traveler will achieve nothing. Most of the plots are written around these, and the homogeneity of the works is particularly serious, and it also derives the fallacy of thinking that military chess ratios are the same. The theory of physical invincibility and the theory of the omnipotence of the Imperial Scriptures are all products of this way of thinking. Treating physique and imperial scriptures as indispensable things reduces the width and breadth of creation, lowers the level of plug-ins, and makes the plot look unreasonable. Those fanatics and fan authors are more familiar with the original work than I am. After all, I have only read it once, and I have skipped many of the seemingly messy Che Lulu words. But even so, I can still remember that there are many characters in the original work who do not have the emperor's scriptures or special physiques, and there are even characters who are very strong without using many natural materials and earthly treasures. This shows that physical constitution, imperial scriptures, and heavenly materials and earthly treasures do not affect a person's achievements. Because the strongest physique can be cultivated, it proves that physique is a derivative of Tao. The Emperor's Scripture was also created from scratch by predecessors. If the protagonist has a cheat and a strong heart, he should not pursue this kind of thing too much. Most of the treasures of heaven, materials and earth are formed over many years under special circumstances, using the essence of heaven and earth as energy. Whether it is present or not does not affect the monk's practice. At most, it saves the monk's time in practice, and is not an indispensable thing. The cheating time traveler protagonist should not rely on these things to reach the end. If fan works always mention these things, it will make the works look uniform and tasteless.

It feels silly. The system is too expensive to watch the protagonist. Lower the difficulty. It's a bad batch.

It doesn't have the overpowering flavor, and writing a fanfic would stretch my legs to the point of the original work.

"Mercenaries Trick the World"

@readerHow can I read this book 🙂