I Join the Chat Group with the Same Protagonist as Chuan Liu

The writing in key places is so disgusting. It always contains political correctness in some places. Just give it three stars.

The protagonist of the Marvel world goes to Kunlun to study for extraordinary power, why not look for the Extremis virus? The Marvel protagonist has a big background and is very rich. Finding someone is not easy. You have to go to Kunlun to learn Qi. And Marvel has a lot of extraordinary abilities in the early stage, and the protagonists are not ordinary people. Spider-Man's Super Spider, the Lizard Man, the Green Goblin, and Venom. The DC protagonist can also plan the Green Lantern Ring, but he has to steal compound No. 5, And then the ability is still borrowed. If you study No. 5, You can succeed immediately, right?

Some of the same worlds in it don't know how to set the plot. Starting from the full-time mages, how can there be so many people who can fly? Even with wind magic, you can glide at low altitude, but it is not flying. And among the full-time mages, I remember that not everyone has awakened magic. The ratio of ordinary people to mages is probably dozens to 1 or 100:1

It's not very good, it's a bit left-brain versus right-brain. A few pages ago, it was said that the protagonist relied on money to get into Kunlun, and then he said that the outside world's currency was useless 🙂

I want to know, if they all wear the same clothes, then Duke's space should be standard. What's the point of adding a chat group where everyone is their own? What's the point of adding the same thing to both platforms?

The world view of the interaction between the left and right brain means that no matter how good you practice, you will never be able to defeat the modern army. No matter how awesome the protagonist is, you must fulfill your filial piety to the Heavenly Master.

The plot where the protagonist chooses a wand is really thunderous.

I talked about the starting point to guide the poison god, but I can't understand whether I'm wearing the same thing as life and death, and I can still push it if I click on it and I'm not interested.

DC is one of the most difficult plots to write in the early stage. Because there are too many crises. There are almost no avenues for growth. The safest solution is to tell Mr. Wayne all you know about the plot and your own situation. Make sure he doesn't turn into the Laughing Bat. Then live peacefully under his supervision.

The plot of Harry Potter world is quite juvenile.

No, bro, am I paying to see this unfortunate thing? You don't think that sbwy in the monster list, who obviously has problems with his IQ and logic, can be written very vividly, do you?

How to say it? Very fragmented. It's not much different from those Tongchuan texts. They always introduce a new protagonist and tell a story. To be honest, the author should choose one or two main lines to talk about. Instead of coming in and talking one by one. What's the difference between this and a collection of short stories? In addition, there are many minor problems that are quite dramatic. It always makes people wonder if the author is a bit cloudy. But overall this novel was pretty good to me. Because I can ignore these little problems. But if you have a serious dislike for not respecting the original design. Or maybe you don't like it very much and there is no main line. Not recommended to watch.

The Versatile Mage is a hit. Will you, the author, still write about that world?

Writing starting from Harry Potter will not work.

It's too fragmented. The same flow should have a general context. The combat power in the early and middle stages is different, and the main world chosen is also different. Each stage should have two or three worlds that focus on description, and other worlds can be described a little. This can quickly give readers a sense of immersion. This book makes a big mistake. Each world is mentioned casually, without any excessive plot, and it immediately changes to the next world. This affects reading very much.

It was fine at the beginning, but as it went on it became more and more complicated and I felt like it was starting to get over the plot.

The heroine of hp won't be Hermione, right? I personally dislike her, she is too pushy.

It's written here and there, a bit messy, and it doesn't feel immersive.

😂😂😂 I saw it on Douyin today. It is said that the director admitted it

The characters are added too quickly. Will so many more people be added later?

I haven't done much with the previous ones, but a new world has opened up. After finishing Star Dome Railway, I want to read the sequel to Fairy Tale World.

Another difference in memory is the trapping chat group.

One card an hour. It's only 5pm and you can't support it anymore.

Inside. Tony Stark is alive and well. But he always likes to look very wise. Damn Frankman. It's a character meant to be funny. It's better than going to the Earthly Immortal Realm to be an ambassador. Much better. So no wonder I got scolded badly.

It's not bad, but there are too many worlds added now, and they can be collected. It's better to finish one group of worlds first and then add another group. It's too confusing. The previous group of worlds hasn't been written much yet, and the next group of worlds has been added.