This Apocalypse Is a Mess.

In the desolate and dark underground, there is an endless unknown, and what I saw was a race full of green light, with bells ringing from time to time. The first sound was thanks to the man in black, who brought the towering dark tower to hold the sacred pendulum. The second sound is to let the light of darkness take root in this land. The third sound is to thank it for its grace, allowing us to have the sacred sacred horn. The fourth tone is to allow us to have a deeper understanding of those dirty and cruel philosophies. The fifth tone is to let all the clean and tidy stupidity be purified by our sacred messy filth. The sixth tone, thank you for giving us the mother rat, so that our selfishness and offspring can grow and die without control. The seventh tone, thank you for giving us thinking and allowing our madness to be truly and vividly displayed. The eighth tone, thanks to the gems shining with bright green light in the darkness, gives us the ability to pollute and be polluted. The ninth tone, in order to allow believers to perceive its existence, is evil and unbearable. The tenth sound is to make our compatriots whose death is insignificant feel their insignificance. The eleventh sound makes the incense burner carrying germs wander around the world. The twelfth tone, let death and survival become our eternal illnesses. The thirteenth call, the horned rat walks among us! Yes! Yes!

Finally there is a new Shushu flow

Shushu is good, I like it very much, but the level setting is a bit counter-intuitive. It would be better to change it to the more traditional white, green, blue, purple and gold 🙂

Legend has it that a long time ago, humans and dwarves lived together in a city called Cavizal. They decided to build a hammer version of the Tower of Babel to thank the gods for the prosperity they had given them. But even the dwarf engineers didn't know how to build such a tall tower. At this time, a mysterious man in gray expressed his willingness to help with the planning. He did not want any reward, but only asked to add a big bell on the top of the tower to pay respect to his god. When the tower was completed, the man in gray disappeared, and the big clock on the top of the tower chimed thirteen times. It started to rain constantly, a large number of residents began to get sick, crops failed, newborns died or were deformed, and the rats in the city became more and more numerous, bigger, and smarter (in the old version of the story, the stranger asked for payment for building the tower but the residents refused to pay, so he cursed the city, but the new version does not mention this at all). Horror movie material +1 The big clock rings thirteen times every day. The rain turned into hail, and the hail turned into rain of fire. The number of rats continued to increase, and they began to swarm to prey on the old, weak, sick and disabled. When the strange events first began, humans sought help from their dwarf allies. For the first time, the dwarves called them cowards who were frightened by mice and rejected them. The second time, the dwarf rejected them because the rats ate up all the dwarf's food. For the third time, the surviving humans were desperate. They pried open the door of the dwarf stronghold and asked for help... Only to see dwarf skeletons and swarms of rats everywhere. The poem ends with the rats eating the last surviving humans.

Suddenly I thought of that game where the protagonist can control mice

It's so good, but there are so few comments. Why is it that people who like exotic beasts are so niche?

Shushu is so cute, how can he be hurt?

Now that I have read Chapter 10, let me share some of my feelings. If it is a new author, I feel that it still has great potential, the world view is good, and the story is quite interesting, but the processing seems a bit jerky, and I feel that the reading volume is not large enough. People who are also traveling through non-human beings can learn from the popular mushroom-growing dungeon. And if you want to make some mice particularly distinctive, you can learn the fourth natural disaster. If you can use these feelings, your writing will be smoother. But since I have also read the first ten chapters, if the author thinks something is wrong, just ignore it.

17/73. Food and grass. Nothing too special, just articles about traveling through time and becoming alien beasts. It reminds me of a book that seems to be called "Growing Mushrooms in the Dungeon"?

It's a very smooth work. I just regret that the word count is too small and it's not enough to read.

The setting is okay, but the rhythm and narration are not, making it boring to read.