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Writing novels with AI in between? Who likes to watch your inner drama as a primary school student better than you?
There are 8 chapters in one game and the game is not finished. This rhythm is really a headache. . .
The rhythm is too fast, and the system is the same. If you have such a system and you are already the irreplaceable core of tactics, you have to earn points in a few unimportant games. The last point is the most uncomfortable. 70% Of the chapters are like giving us popular science or mixed with some things that are not the main story. For example, I was originally writing about the protagonist, and then I wrote about what happened to Ferguson and what happened to other people. Then there is no rhythm.
Slow pace, too much inner drama, no highlights, a waste of time, don't watch it
Evaluate it, it's too poisonous, I'm asking you to quit. In the beginning, you write two chapters Two chapters don't count. You haven't finished writing yet. You were still confused for 5 minutes, as if you didn't react to anything. This is too poisonous. Brothers, I quit now.
You don't have any knowledge about football. What is Super League? The Golden Boot of the First Division is not valuable. You say yes, the Golden Boot of the First Division can at least help the Premier League team, but it is still looked down upon?
The author takes a look
Author, your system has not played any role so far. If you want to slow down the rhythm, you should cancel the system. Don't rewards be settled in every game? I have played several games and I haven't seen the protagonist receiving rewards. Although the writing is good so far, the rewards that the protagonist strives to get are not available at all. It is like a painted pie that cannot be eaten. It feels no good.
The author is a fan of the Internet celebrity team Manchester United. The main mission? I didn't see it. There is too much water. One chapter is 2,000 words, and the main content is up to 500 words. The rest is either water or shit. The private goods included are shit. What did Ferguson, Ronaldo, Rooney and other players do that I need to pay to come to see you?
The only thing is that the morale of the substitute players will be weakened when the protagonist is included in the roster.
I guess he's another one who doesn't watch football.
He ran away after four chapters and had no sense of immersion. This is a common problem with another first-level basketball novel and two other entertainment articles I have read. I don't know why the current author is getting more and more engrossed in writing. Can you give me a stronger sense of immersion? What are you writing?
Beautifully written
The author writes at your own pace, and I think the writing is quite good. The growth of the protagonist is interesting. At present, the homogeneous competition is too serious. Some novels are already invincible after less than 100 chapters. What's the point of a novel if the protagonist becomes invincible after just one season? How to write next. Football novel, classic novel. It won't be upgraded too quickly. I think it will be a masterpiece if written like this.
You, a forward, running into your own penalty area before anyone has the ball, is even more outrageous than Luo Ge running into the opponent's goal.
Go to bed and go to the street. What the hell is this?
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It was grinding in the front, but it turned out to be pretty good in the later stages.
I've read dozens of traditional football articles, and I'm really tired of them, so I just like to read more lively ones.
The entire title of the book is full of awkward words, without exception.
National interests are above all else, but sports are not. Sports belong to individuals and sports do not contribute to the country
It feels like it's just for the sake of bullshit logic.