Global God Realm: Huh? Shall We Block the Sky?

They already have the Kunpeng Treasure Technique and the Taiyin Sun Emperor Sutra. If they don't understand these three transforming chaotic bodies, they will die with the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique. Pure suffocation operation

I quite like this type of setting, but unfortunately there are too many unreasonable parts of the plot. Even if the protagonist causes a system hang-up, it is better than a plot hang-up where something is obviously wrong.

From Taishan to Beidou, I used more than a dozen photos, but they were too watery.

It's a rubbish novel. You're a disciple of the Zi Mansion, you have to exchange the Emperor's Scripture for resources, you have the essence, blood and background of the ruthless emperor, but you don't join Yaoguang and become the Holy Lord, you're a fool.

A Zixia Saint's innate Taoist body, the essence and blood of each realm is forever complete, the Emperor's Sutra of the Western Emperor + other incomplete Emperor's Sutras + the Nine Secrets + the elixir of death is given in each realm. Is it reasonable? What do you think?

Looking at the introduction, the highest level is covering the sky?

It's not very good, the hook is too big, and it will easily collapse if you don't press it. The more amazing thing is to join a second-rate sect like Zifu Holy Land. The key is that it doesn't give the protagonist any help. Also, the plot of Zixia is too outrageous, just say it when you want someone else's body, and the setting of the divine mirror in your book can be deleted or written. There is no integration at all, and the advantages and highlights of this setting are not used.

The main feeling is that it is too arrogant. The protagonist's golden finger is not a simulator. How dare he go to see the ruthless emperor when he is a mortal? How can a mortal know so much information? I can't explain it clearly. Is the information of a mortal credible? Don't even think about these problems

Everything is taken for granted. I can only give a maximum of 6 points out of 10. Don't try to deceive the strong in front of them. Just like the black-robed pickets of the motherland, people will know your true identity by seeing through your blood flow and emotional fluctuations.

What secret can test an immortal? Mortal threat?

Isn't there a big gap between Tianlong and Zhetian? In most martial arts novels, even some bosses can directly travel through the past and use their guns. There is nothing interesting about this kind of writing. Mainly, I feel that as the protagonist, I feel that I am not much different from ordinary people and me. But I also know some big guys who are so awesome. I can't understand why they rise.

Go directly to the ruthless emperor to confess everything? Don't ruthless people directly search for their souls? I really think they regard ruthless people as relatives.

Time has been messed up. Originally, the Blue Star people planned to let the protagonist go to Zhetian to use the time difference of newcomer benefits to develop and save the world. But now the time difference is gone. When the protagonist comes back, I don't know what is happening with Blue Star.

As expected, it was already broken when I wrote it, and it completely broke after I returned to the real world.

How did you know the name of the ancient star before the plot started? Patch it. Blue Star comes with background map notifications.

What kind of stuff did I write after I returned to Earth? It was a crushing game that could be finished in one or two chapters. I just pretended to be a slap in the face and the water collapsed. I should abandon the book earlier and stop the loss.

What you wrote in Zhetian is okay, but when you return to the real world, these pictures are like shit. If you keep writing like this, I think you will collapse.

How stupid! I was so confident in the early days to go find a ruthless person, but when we actually met, I vomited!

Read a fan novel, especially a closed-loop novel like Zhetian. What I hate the most is that the timeline is in the early stages and you are telling me to focus on the future. With such a powerful ability that penetrates all the heavens, and is also a divine weapon above the Taboo, there wouldn't be an initial timeline? What time does Fei play in a closed loop?

This is the first time I see such a stubborn author like you, just take your time and play with it.

It's too imaginary. The realms are just nouns and cannot perform as they should. Also, are the zombies in the zombie world too awesome? At least the zombies I saw in some movies were not afraid of bullets. The cannons of that period could be smashed, let alone what about now? The martial arts master was written into an ordinary person by you

Global copy. Go directly to Zhetian. Then whether he can return to Earth or not, what else can he do when he returns to Earth's Novice Village? Either pass it directly into Zhetian, which is the old routine. Either travel through various dungeons from Hong Kong Sect and Low Wu (the combat power cannot collapse, and if it collapses and returns to Earth, it cannot suppress the fourth natural disaster). After all, with swords and swords outside, you must be able to suppress them when you return to the main city of Earth.