Youxianzhuan

The beginning was okay, but just seeing the protagonist's pretentious tone made me feel uncomfortable for no reason. I don't know why. . I didn't have such a big reaction when I watched Ke Qiyuan die before, maybe it's because I'm past that age. Looking at Xiao Caiji's inexplicable adaptability to various environments, he has a self-confident and artificial tone of pretending to be a big shot, which feels very fake. . Instead of reaching the sky in one step, it is better to learn from a teacher step by step, get familiar with the environment down-to-earth, and occasionally come up with some ideas. Then use modern equipment to make some unexpected assists

As long as the author keeps it up and studies the first and middle parts of "Lan Ke Qi Yuan", the score of this book should not be bad.

The protagonist knows about Yang difference, which means he knows some folklore knowledge Does he actually not know about the ancient black cat that controls the house? The black cat and the black cat are house psychics In addition, in metaphysics, it is normal for children's souls to be unstable and separated from the body

Don't throw away the modern equipment, shoes and clothes that the protagonist has on hand. It would be a pity to throw them away. It is rare to travel through time together. I hope it will play a role in the subsequent plot. After reading the beginning, I had a lot of ideas instantly. . Try to see if you can refine your mobile phone into a magical weapon. It would be great if you could bring a small flashlight with you through time. Although mobile phones also have the function of a flashlight, in terms of form, a small flashlight is more suitable for refining into an artifact that can slay evil spirits and destroy demons. It is portable, compact and illuminates hundreds of meters. It is so handsome that it is so handsome that it surpasses the peach wood sword and the copper coin sword across the ages. Just thinking about it makes me excited!

If you have any questions, you can point them out in this comment. The author is writing for the first time, so if you have any questions, you must accept them with an open mind! (Bow)

To be honest, it was very funny when a strange Taoist priest told a little sermon story and asked the protagonist for his opinion.

/It looks like a fairy, let's keep it for a while and then look at it

The writing is quite good. To be honest, it just feels a bit like pretending to be fake wherever I go. But this is a small problem. I just need to cultivate my mind. It's best to build my own dojo somewhere. It's really perfect.

Was the grass carp caught in the net and killed as a grass carp?

Don't be dominated by some people. Write according to your own ideas. If you don't feel like it, you can read the comment section. Don't read it normally.

It's time to make up for it. I've given you the reward, the monthly ticket, and the group building. Otherwise, no one dares to chase you. If you become a eunuch, I'll kill you.

The writing is good. In the current book shortage, it is surprisingly good. I hope there will be no eunuchs and there will not be too many logical flaws. Good luck, author 🤭🤭🤭

The author has watched Lan Ke Qi Yuan? The style feels quite similar

The writing feels a bit like golden jasmine, which is a good start. Now it is very difficult to find a book that I want to read. I hope the author will keep writing.

The writing is very good. To be honest, as long as you don't supervise it, you will definitely book it all.

Newcomer, this name, this profile, the quality is so high, can I sign a contract?

Author, do you have any ideas to create a group where everyone can chat sometimes and also help you accumulate some fans? Well written

Let's start a group

It's getting more and more flavorful. It's a bit like Ke Qiyuan's Ju'an Pavilion. You should get a mountain-like one. This will be much better. Make friends with sentient beings and demons. This way, the fairy flavor will be better.