A Witcher Who Travels Across the World

The mage leads a few mercenaries to raid the protagonist and the demon hunter. The protagonist was held hostage and almost escaped. Later, the protagonist's ancient blood burst defeated the opponent and captured a mercenary. The mercenary saw the protagonist's ancient blood burst scene (but did not know it was ancient blood). After the battle, he captured the mercenary and then released him. Don't understand, but goodbye.

The writing is pretty good, but it's not good to watch. The dramatic conflicts are boring, the training is boring, and the commissions are boring. I feel like I'm just wandering around in another world. I've really seen enough of the Witcher's encounters.

It's okay at the front, but the part where the mage and his mercenaries came to rob the castle is awkward. The protagonist is an adult soul. Faced with a female mercenary looking for a book, I choose to resist. I don't understand it. Female mercenary Can you read or not? Do you know what a magical book is? How can it be so fast to find the books the mage wants in a completely unfamiliar environment? Whatever the protagonist wants to fight with her, he just drags her and it's over. He doesn't write like a child with an adult soul, he writes like an idiot. It would be too cliché if it was to trigger the outbreak of ancient blood later. It's purely to advance the plot without caring about maintaining the character. This paragraph is very problematic.

I hate this kind of thing the most. Even though I have traveled through time, I still insist on saying that I am a scientific materialist. I don't believe this or that.

You need to practice cooking more, learn the skills of pile driving from your predecessors, study and practice diligently, and don't lose your status when you go out to hang out!

The story has no main line, and the protagonist has no clear goal. It feels very confusing when reading, and I have no clue what I want to say. .

The Witcher is a literary/game work in the Western fantasy style, so the world view chosen is best and similar, such as The Elder Scrolls, Dark Souls, Monster Hunter, Diablo... This style is relatively similar. If you time travel to an anime like Naruto, Bleach and One Piece, or travel to the world of Jin Yong's martial arts, it would seem too inconsistent.

The protagonist learned magic from the elven sages for 4 years in the mountains. However, when he came down from the mountain, he couldn't even perform the cleansing technique. He had the ancient blood constitution with the ability to teleport across the world, and he didn't drink the herbal medicine to become a real demon hunter. As a result, he fainted and teleported.

I have been coding until now. After my writing skills improve, I will rewrite some of the previous fragments.

What do I want to say? They are said to be time-travelers, but in fact they are no different from indigenous people. There is no time traveler's wisdom at all. Ordinary and bland. It feels boring. And you are already a demon ape, with ancient blood. If the time traveler had these, holy shit, it would have turned upside down. Develop capabilities to change the status quo. Nothing was written. It looks like I'm learning all the time, but in fact it's just rote memorization. There is no improvement, no understanding. Ordinary

I like this introduction: In the world of Internet literature where Bai Shuang's writing is everywhere and his anger is high, it is rare to see a protagonist with positive values. For this reason, I am willing to give it a thumbs up.

This is just a family opinion, everyone is welcome to discuss When an adult becomes a child, is he an adult with a body like a child? I think that when the body becomes a child, the thinking and behavior patterns will change to a certain extent. This is actually independent of human will. Compared to an adult, the hormone levels and hormone secretion in a child are vastly different. These hormones and hormones will affect the person to a certain extent. There are also changes in the body and organs that will have an impact. Give me an example: young people are full of vitality, while old people are lifeless. If this old man suddenly becomes young one day, will he still be lifeless and lively? Or if this young man suddenly turns into an 80-year-old man, his eyes cannot see clearly, his ears cannot hear, his thinking is slow, and his body is sluggish. Can he still be full of energy?

If you start reading it directly from Caer Siren, it is an excellent novel with aboriginal protagonists and a very original flavor. Western fantasy fans and wizard fans can come and check it out. There are also shortcomings. The protagonist sets up the identity of the time traveler but does not show it in any way. Some fragments are long and difficult to read, and the background is unclear. These are all minor flaws, and it can be said to be an above-average Witcher series fanfic.

The reason why many modern novels use time traveler protagonists is that they can easily insert background settings and purpose of action. You write slowly now, and you don't often state the main line. As a result, after reading one chapter today, you will not know what you are going to do when you read the next chapter the next day. The best way is of course to update it, but judging from your writing style, I know that you can't do it, so I hope you can improve your writing style and occasionally introduce the progress of the main and branch lines. Your novel is indeed well written, but the problem is that it is not suitable as an online novel.

Have you seen Zelin next door? There is a lot to learn from.

Has the author read it? Have you seen it? If you haven't read it, give it a look. The story is very exciting. People cannot always do the right thing, but it must be in line with their inner beliefs. The protagonist cannot always be right. It is precisely because of mistakes that growth can occur. Such ups and downs of growth are particularly precious, and it also makes readers feel gratified by the growth of the protagonist in the story.

Is this a time traveler? Haven't seen it so far. I have the experience of someone who has watched so many movies, TV shows, and novels for decades.

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Conclusion Ancient Blood Demon Hunters can have their own Zanpakutō, and may even give birth to unique sword spirits with special rules. However, the acquisition, training, and liberation mechanisms are obviously different from those of local Shinigami. The following is a complete breakdown of the underlying rules of the Shinigami Zanpakutō, the adaptability of Ancient Blood, the two acquisition routes, the sword's spirit characteristics, and its shortcomings and risks. 1. The core underlying rules of the Bleach's original Zanpakutō 1. The essence of the Zanpakutō: the embodied clone of your own soul essence. The sword spirit is the projection of your soul, and its power is driven by the soul spirit son (spiritual power). 2. Regular acquisition path -Standard route: Receive the "Shallow Attack" forged by Nigeya Wang Yue, accompany it day and night, and continuously pour your own soul spirit into the sword. Over time, the shallow attack breeds the exclusive sword spirit and becomes a Zanpakutō; Shikai needs to know the true name of the sword spirit, and Swastika needs to completely resonate with the sword spirit in the spiritual world and conquer the opponent. - Special route: No need for a shallow attack, the power of one's own soul is strong enough, and it can directly condense the sword spirit in the spiritual world and materialize the blade (Kurosaki Ichigo, a hybrid special soul). 3. There is only one hard threshold for entry: possessing soul spirit energy that can flow and be poured into objects; there are no restrictions on race, origin, or world. Arrancars and Quincy can also give birth to similar sword-shaped spiritual weapons as long as they have the foundation of spiritual bodies. 2. The adaptation basis of the soul and power of the Ancient Blood Demon Hunter 1. The soul level (perfectly suitable for the birth conditions of the Zanpakutō) The holder of the ancient blood is a high-concentration source warlock (Source). The soul itself carries a massive amount of chaotic spiritual energy, and the soul volume and spiritual plane strength far exceed ordinary humans and ordinary monsters; The soul has complete self-awareness and an independent spiritual inner domain, which just meets the basis of "nurturing the sword spirit" - the essence of the sword spirit is a part of the soul consciousness that has been stripped and precipitated. 2. Power system compatibility (can convert the spiritual power of the world of death) The origin of the ancient blood is the chaotic magic power of cross-dimensional time and space, which has the characteristics of assimilating and converting the spiritual rules of different worlds: After arriving in the Soul Society/the present world, the chaotic magic power in the body will spontaneously resonate with the local spirit sons, and slowly transform into the spiritual power of the Death God system, which is enough to continuously supply the shallow attack and nourish the sword spirit; Even if it is not actively transformed, the massive amount of native chaotic spiritual energy can be forcibly infused into the shallow attack, temporarily simulating spiritual power to complete the resonance. 3. References for comparison with Ichigo Kurosaki Ichigo is a triple hybrid of Death + Quincy + Hollow. His soul is mixed with the power of the three systems, and he still skips the shallow attack and directly gives birth to Zangetsu; The soul complexity and inter-dimensional energy level of the ancient blood holder far exceeds that of Ichigo. In theory, it is easier to follow the special route of "unlimited attack and self-condensing Zanpakutō". 3. Two feasible routes for obtaining Zanpakutō Route 1: Conventional route - receiving shallow training (safe, low threshold) 1. Go to the Zero Squadron/Zhenyang Spiritual Arts Academy to apply for a shallow attack; 2. Carry it with you all year round, and continue to infiltrate the blade with your own ancient blood and chaotic spiritual energy; 3. It takes less time than an ordinary Shinigami. Breeding the sword spirit: The energy concentration of the ancient soul is extremely high, and the infusion speed is dozens of times that of ordinary gods of death; 4. After the sword spirit is born, it enters the spiritual world through dialogue with sword Zen, learns the true name, unlocks the first solution, and reaches the swastika solution through deep resonance. Route 2: Special original route - without relying on shallow attack, directly condense the Zanpakutō on oneself (exclusive advantage of ancient blood) No need for Futamaya's shallow attack carrier, directly condense the sword spirit in the spiritual world, and then solidify the mental projection into a physical blade: 1. The blood of the ancients has its own independent and complete spiritual plane of time and space, and the soul power is strong enough, without the need for an external knife as a medium; 2. The physical blade can be reshaped at will, and is not limited by a shallow fixed material; 3. Advantages: The sword spirit is more deeply bound to its own soul, and the power loss is lower, and there will be no weakness of the Quincy's plundering the Swastika (the sword spirit does not have an independent spirit carrier). 4. The sword spirit and ability characteristics of Ancient Blood's exclusive Zanpakutō 1. The image of the sword spirit Integrating the killing nature of the demon hunter + the origin of time and space of Ancient Blood, the image will not be the conventional water, fire, animal or plant type: It is most likely to be a spiritual shadow that travels through the plane, a humanoid figure with time and space rifts, a phantom carrying countless fragments of the world, and a personality that combines alienation and compassion with killing sharpness. 2. Zanpakutō's inherent abilities (Haikai + Swastika core) - The basic ability of the Haikou: regular slashing to purify the void, additionally added ancient blood talent - short-range space flash, tearing small dimensional rifts, slashing with time and space splitting effect, can cut through spirits, barriers, and curses; - The core ability of the swastika: Expand a small independent space-time field, freely control the flow of time in the field, and open inter-dimensional passages; it can not only purify voids and evil spirits on a large scale, but also seal enemies to alien planes. It perfectly combines the two core abilities of the Death Zanpakutō's "spirit-slaying purification" and the ancient blood's "time and space travel". 3. Unique advantages 1. The soul foundation is strong, the spiritual life is far longer than that of the same-level Shinigami, and the duration of the swastika is greatly extended; 2. Cross-dimensional perception: can detect the invading spirits from other worlds (wild hunting spirits, monsters from other worlds). Ordinary Shinigami Zanpakutō cannot identify dead souls from other planes, but this knife can; 3. Compatible with dual-system power: it can not only use the power of the Shinigami to purify the void, but also release chaotic magic to fight against magic and curse enemies. 5. Innate shortcomings and usage restrictions 1. Risk of backlash from conflict of forces The essence of ancient chaos magic and the soul of death are not completely homologous. When the space-time ability is frequently used or the time and space ability is used at high intensity, the two energies will conflict in the body, which can range from mental dizziness and spiritual disorder to tearing apart space and randomly opening rifts leading to the wizarding world and the Wild Hunt plane, attracting intruders from other worlds. 2. It is more difficult to communicate with the sword spirit The ancient blood soul carries countless plane memories and prophecy fragments, and the spiritual world is extremely chaotic. The consciousness of the sword spirit is mixed with time and space fragments. It is more difficult to maintain a stable dialogue than an ordinary god of death. It is prone to situations where the liberation of the first solution cannot be stabilized, and long-term meditation is required to suppress the restlessness of the blood. 3. Resurrection/transcendence rule restrictions Zanpakutō purification only takes effect on the native void, whole, and dead souls of the Shinigami world; spiritual bodies that are thrown into alien planes and belong to other worlds can only be chopped into pieces and cannot complete the purification cycle. This is a barrier to the underlying laws of the world and cannot be completely offset by the blood of the ancients. 4. The threshold for practicing swastika is higher Ordinary Shinigami only need to accept their own sword spirit; when holding swastika, the holder of the ancient blood must also coordinate the time and space power and sword spirit in the body at the same time. If there is a slight resistance, it will be backlashed by the domain, and it is easy to be seriously injured. 6. Summary 1. Can it be obtained? Absolutely, there are two routes to choose from, the soul and energy conditions of the ancient blood are even better than those of most local shinigami; 2. What is the difference between the sword? The sword spirit has the attributes of time and space, and Shijie and Swastika are equipped with cross-dimensional and time control capabilities, and are extremely versatile; 3. The price? High-load liberation has huge risks of space tearing and energy backlash, and practice requires more energy to stabilize the resonance between blood and sword spirit. Supplement: Even if you don't join Soul Society or receive a shallow fight, as long as you stay in the Shinigami world long enough and your soul continues to absorb local spirit children, you will spontaneously condense your own Zanpakutō based on the soul strength of the ancient blood.

Preliminary core setting pavement (determines the logic of martial arts selection) You are a pure ancient blood holder, no green grass trial transformation: 1. Natural foundation: super self-healing, alien magic power (chaotic spiritual energy/time and space blood force), top five senses, super mental power, resistance to poison and curse, stable soul, and weak spatial perception; but without the transformation of bones, muscles, and internal organs brought about by the Green Grass Trial, the basic strength of the physical body is only better than that of ordinary Jianghu people, and not as good as martial arts such as external skills and iron cloth shirts. 2. Core strengths: spirit, perception, magic self-healing, blood energy storage; shortcomings: weak physical resistance, no potion amplification, and cannot rely on physical strength to withstand heavy weapons or fierce external skills. 3. Adaptation logic: Give priority to kung fu that leverages strength, nourishes the soul with internal strength, has low physical consumption, can be integrated with blood magic, and has full perception and prediction; avoid kung fu that is extremely body-consuming, pure horizontal training, and relies on self-mutilation to gain strength. 1. T0 must learn (cost-effective ceiling, perfect fit for ancient blood) 1. Beiming Divine Skill Adaptation reasons: - Regardless of the internal power attribute, the absorbed internal power can be blended with the magic power of the ancient bloodline, and transformed into a composite energy that combines internal power + alien spiritual energy, and the battery life is doubled; - The core gain of soul and spirit just amplifies the top spiritual power of the ancient blood, greatly reducing the risk of going crazy; - There is no need to practice external skills to lay the foundation, only the coordination of physical skills is needed to make up for the shortcomings of your physical body, and you do not rely on brute force to win; - Massive internal force accelerates self-healing, superimposed with bloodline self-healing, and minor injuries can be recovered instantly. Avoidance points: Do not absorb the internal energy of top masters excessively. Mixing the internal energy of different species will temporarily interfere with bloodline space-time perception. 2. Lingbo Weibu Reasons for adaptation: - Relying on the internal force of the meridians to pull the body, rather than relying on physical brute force to explode, it perfectly avoids the shortcomings of your lack of green grass trials and the physical body's inability to withstand violent impacts; - The walking trajectory conforms to the rhythm of heaven and earth, and can resonate with the plane and space perception of the ancient blood, predicting the enemy's moves, airflow, and killing intent; - There are zero injuries, no self-mutilation, no wasting of muscles and bones during practice. It is the most life-saving skill. Combined with your super five senses, it is almost difficult to be hit at close range. 3. Six Meridians Divine Sword Reasons for adaptation: - Use internal force to transform invisible sword energy into remote output, without the need for physical confrontation or close combat; - The mode of fingertip air conduction can mix the magic power of ancient blood into the sword energy. The sword energy has the effect of splitting space and breaking evil, and is specially designed to restrain Jianghu poisonous skills, Yin evil internal force, and hard body protection skills; - The stronger your spiritual power, the higher your power. The strength of your ancient bloodline soul crushes all warriors of the same level. Your cultivation speed is far faster than ordinary people, and it does not require a hundred years of foundation. 2. T1 cost-effective auxiliary martial arts (compensating for shortcomings and amplifying bloodline advantages) 1. Yi Jin Jing Reason for adaptation: Jin Yong's first gentle and orthodox internal power cleanses the marrow and cuts the meridians without destroying the physical body, purely broadening the capacity of the meridians; After the meridians are widened, they can accommodate more internal force + blood magic power, increasing the speed of self-healing and magic flow; harmonizing foreign energy, counteracting the side effects of Bei Ming Sheng Gong absorbing mixed internal power, stabilizing the soul and preventing the blood from becoming uncontrollable. 2. Tai Chi + Tai Chi Sword Reasons for adaptation: The core is to use gentleness to offload force, predict the enemy's strength, and not rely on strength to fight; Your top perception can capture the trajectory of the opponent's force in advance, and Tai Chi's idea of ​​using force to fight is in line with the origin of the ancient bloodline's "reconciliation and assimilation of alien forces"; Low consumption in combat, long-lasting combat has great advantages, suitable for your shortcomings of not being good at physical fights, integrating offense and defense. 3. Dugu Nine Swords Reasons for adaptation: Emphasis on perception, prediction, and logic of breaking moves, and does not rely on strong internal strength and physical strength; The blood of the ancients has super five senses, killing intent capture, and spatial perception can instantly see through the flaws in the opponent's moves. The system of winning without any moves is a perfect match for your talents; Paired with Lingbo Microstep to extend the distance, six-vein long-range consumption, and close-loop tactics of far and near. 3. T2 Functional Martial Arts (targeted reinforcement, learning on demand, no need to major) 1. Nine-Yang Divine Skill Pure endurance, self-healing assistance, Yang Qi neutralization of Yin-cold poison, superimposed blood self-healing; shortcomings are strong, majoring will increase the burden on the body, and is only suitable as a supplementary internal skill to reconcile Qi and blood. 2. Dragon Elephant Prajna Kung Fu (shallow levels are enough, don't practice high levels) The first few levels gently strengthen the Qi and blood and deepen the thickness of the internal strength; after the tenth level, the muscles and bones are torn apart and the physical body is overdrawn. You have no green grass trial and transformation, and you must not practice it deeply. It is only for superficial Qi and blood strengthening. 3. Yiyang Finger The magical skill of point-pointing to control the field, precise Qi guidance, can mix blood magic to block the opponent's meridians and magic flow, assist in controlling the enemy, and cooperate with the universal fingering foundation of the Six Meridians Divine Sword. 4. Northern Ming Claw/Xuan Ming Divine Palm (not majoring) Xuan Ming Cold Poison can be transformed with blood magic power and turned into a field control method with dimensional cold air. However, pure Yin skills can easily disturb the blood time and space energy, so it can only be used as a sneak attack alternative. 4. Not recommended at all (extremely low cost performance, conflicts with pure ancient blood) 1. Pure horizontal training of hard skills: Golden Bell Cover, Iron Cloth Shirt, Thirteen Taibao horizontal training Relying on drugs and self-mutilation to temper the body, you don't have the green grass to test the transformation of internal organs. Hard training will accumulate hidden injuries, and the physical body cannot withstand the shock damage, and the price/performance ratio is extremely low. 2. Self-mutilation martial arts: Seven Injury Fist, Ice Spreading Palm, Evil-Repelling Sword Technique Forcibly overdrawing Qi and blood, damaging the soul meridians. Although your blood and spirit are strong, long-term self-mutilation will tear the magic circulation, which is not worth the gain. 3. Pure brute force palm technique: Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms (not suitable for majors) The explosion relies on the flesh and bones to carry the impact. Frequent hard blasts without modification of the flesh will damage the internal organs. It can only be used to relieve force in a superficial way, and cannot be used as the main output. 4. The Star Absorbing Technique The foreign internal force accumulates directly in the body without any coordination method, which will seriously interfere with the stability of the ancient bloodline and can easily cause the power of time and space to go wild. It is far inferior to the Beiming Divine Technique. The optimal complete set of training routes (maximizing bloodline talents, the highest overall cost-effectiveness) 1. Basic internal strength: Beiming Shen Gong + Yi Jin Jing (energy storage, coordination, spiritual soul dual strengthening) 2. Body skills to save life: Lingbo Weibu (core pulling, anticipation) 3. Remote main output: six Pulse Divine Sword (magic combined with sword energy, long-range armor piercing) 4. Close response: Dugu Nine Swords + Tai Chi (seeing through flaws + offloading force) 5. Auxiliary field control: Yiyang Finger (pointing acupoints to limit enemies) Summary of the core advantages of this set 1. Low physical load throughout the process, avoiding your shortcomings of no grass trial; 2. All core martial arts require "spiritual, perception, energy coordination", which happens to be the strongest talent of pure ancient blood; 3. The two-way fusion of power and blood magic power not only has the offensive and defensive system of Jianghu martial arts, but also retains the original ability of the demon hunter to cross planes, destroy evil, and self-heal; 4. It can be both far and near, and can save lives. It does not need to rely on the physical body to resist the enemy, and the fault tolerance rate is extremely high.

Suddenly I discovered that the protagonist is quite perverted in DND. The protagonist has a bloodline that provides spellcasting ability, and is considered a first-level warlock. There is also warrior training, and he is considered a two-level warrior, and he can also do alchemy and ritual casting. According to the style of the gryphon school of demon hunters, if you find a Helm Temple and make an oath, you can basically transfer to the paladin class directly. Although the level is a bit low, when he grows up, he is really a ruthless person with swords and fire.

I don't understand why the protagonist comes into contact with the warlock so early. What's the point? Not only did it not advance the plot, it was also frustrating to death. If the wizarding world is a cesspit, warlocks are the most disgusting maggots in it.

The Witcher series, the world of Baldur's Gate, and the positive protagonist are all in line with my preferences. As long as your book doesn't collapse, I will definitely follow it. Come on, try to write a few million words.

What kind of support does the author need to finish writing this book😌

You seem to be interested in visiting Warhammer in the Middle Ages. If you are going to Warhammer, I suggest you go to Cathay. It's good to be an agent to clean up pollution or participate in wars, and the eight winds of magic are actually somewhat similar to the magic of chaos. It's a good world whether it's learning spells or getting mounts.

Damn it, I just saw the news about the linkage between Warcraft and DND

The first copy is Baldur's Gate 2? It's a classic game, but it's a bit old. Should the local specialty Drow be arranged 😏, and Mingsala should be arranged 😡, so that it can connect to the timeline of 3 in the later stage.

Is the first world actually a dnd world? This is quite written. If you can solve the problem of chaos magic here, you can cast spells safely.

Perfect

Write slowly and nurture the author 😁