People Are in Douluo, the Incarnation of Thousands of Poisons

Tang Yuan was surrounded and killed in order to seize the fairy grass or his identity was exposed in the middle and later stages, including his former teammates. In desperation, Tang Yuan yelled: "Yu Tianheng, do you remember Tiandou Royal Academy!" Yu Tianheng was stunned, revealing his flaw. Tang Yuan did not hesitate and poked Yu Tianheng's eyes blind with his finger. Yu Tianheng wailed and screamed, suffered severe injuries, and was dripping with blood. Then Tang Yuan punched him in the head! He is dead.

When Insect Chronicles released Douluo, it was not over. Even Insect Chronicles itself was just like a roadside one, and was driven away by the Third Young Master🐶 (It was just a joke, the dog head saved his life)

I'm exhausted from reading it. It's been a little bit annoying since the first chapter. I don't care about setting issues or character strength issues. I won't say anything about the bug on your first soul ring. But the quarrel between Tang San and the protagonist in Chapter 33 is really difficult. I really side with Tang San and Gangzi this time. The reason why the protagonist takes action is even more difficult to judge. Tang San is not Founder. Judging from the current description, treating Tang San like this will only make people think that the protagonist is a Ruozhi.

At the beginning, Fang Yuan traveled through Douluo, and then his talent was poor. Seeing that Tang San's talent was high, he trained Tang San to improve his talent by practicing Blood Skull. He inherited Tang San's will and led San to become a god. Later, the entire Haotian Sect practiced violent upgrades, and then the Grandfather of Ultimate Douluo in the Killing City almost became a god after training. He led the whole clan to become a god together, and all the gods happened to be taken together. This is Fang Yuan's trajectory. Basically, you will have nothing missing from the entire clan (the Holy Lord is happy for you). Even the divine position is matched. Shura is originally in the realm of the God of Killing, and the requirements are not to like killing but to be judged (cannot be corrupted), which is perfect for Fang Yuan. Fang Yuan does not like killing but has to kill 😎😎 Great Love Immortal. With this set, the adaptability to the god position is not high enough. Eternal life is also Fang Yuan's goal after becoming a god. Of course, the main popularity will explode immediately, and you are guaranteed to attract a lot of people, hahaha

It would be better not to write that the protagonist is Fang Yuan, and not feel like Fang Yuan at all. It would be much better to write an original time traveler.

If there is no heroine + immortal master, then I will have to taste the saltiness.

Xiao Wu has done so many things and is not the heroine 666. After watching it, I realized, do you want to be cuckolded or do you want to destroy the three views and kill a heroine who has been helping the protagonist to obtain a soul ring?

Selling Dog Meat by Playing Sheep's Head, the title of the book refers to Gu, but in fact, only the Spring and Autumn Cicada appears in the first few chapters, and the rest are all written around the martial spirit of Blue Silver Grass.

It's not authentic, there's no such plan. No poetry, no sense of crisis, it's too bland

It's boring. The author generally doesn't write 1% of Fang Yuan's charm. I feel that the protagonist is just wearing Fang Yuan's skin. The reality is that he is a little brat who has not grown up and has an average IQ. He adds a jade skin soul skill to Blue Silver Grass at the beginning and tries hard to push it in this direction. Blue Silver Grass is not a plant, at least it takes the path of life~

He only has the appearance of a model worker but not the spirit of a model worker. He does not seize every opportunity to become stronger. For example, Ning Fengzhi's tokens can be exchanged for equivalent resources to help him grow. If the protagonist doesn't know what he needs, then he doesn't want to be a model worker. Model workers are able to adapt to changes and can act. 😥

In order to promote the improvement of the students' quality, the plot of bullying them will be poisonous and fatal after two days of writing. This is just a bullshit.

It's boring. Without the dangers of Insect Chronicles, the blood skull in the starting hand can only be used later. It neither spans time nor is violent. It is slow and boring.

OK, this book review needs to be deleted. I have deleted all normal book reviews before. I still hope that the author will correct it, but it was deleted directly for me.

The bullying part is too outrageous. Douluo Continent is different from the Gu world. Gu masters need to fight hard, so parents in real people don't care. But the noble soul masters in Douluo Continent are different. They don't have to fight or train. Moreover, according to the tradition of beating the younger ones, they were already beaten up in less than the next day (refer to Xue Beng looking for his uncle to find Fu Dugu, and the son of Titan taking action after the grandson of Titan was beaten).

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, and love has lost its hold on tears. Destined to succeed or fail, the Immortal will regret it but I will not.

I feel like my feelings are a little too deliberate.

I know you want to pave the way, but Dou Yi only has such a big map, there is no Immortal Aperture, and there is no Five Realms and Nine Heavens. It is completely in vain that you have been laying the groundwork for so long and can't write a big scene.

Although Gu's original work is not very fast-paced, after all, this is a fan, or a Douluo fan. It's really like Fang Yuan's step-by-step imitation of Gu's rhythm, but there is no gimmick to attract readers to read...

Tang Hao's handling was indeed right. But Tang San couldn't. I think a book friend said something good. Tang San didn't get any paternal love from Tang Hao, but he took care of Tang Hao in every possible way. The protagonist is so kind to Tang San, but Tang San is still deliberately jealous, and then looks at his brother with prejudice. It's still a bit out of character here. Tang San in Part 1, if you and him are brothers, he will actually share things with you. Not to mention other people who were particularly helpful to him, such as Ma Hongjun. He always gave away fairy grass and stuffed demon pills. The protagonist treats Tang San heartily, at least with all his heart, so I feel that he shouldn't do that to the protagonist. Even if he questions his brother like that, he should ask questions in detail, and then express understanding appropriately instead of denying it outright.

I can only say that the first spirit ring is too difficult to stretch. Let's talk about absorbing the animal system first. Tang San was destroyed, and then he absorbed an animal himself, or a beetle. You said snake, I can tell it is mimicry, you said beetle, and I have been talking about plants before, so I can only say that the left and right brains are fighting each other.

I had a good chat with the director earlier, talking about obtaining soul rings based on the endless vitality of the blue silver grass, thereby strengthening the body and doing bastard boxing. Then suddenly he chose a bug. I was really speechless. After 500 years of experience as a pig, your skills are not as good as Xuan. Tian Gong is a martial arts internal skill. It is said to be natural divine power plus physical training, but the result is still a 400-year soul ring It has something to do with vitality at least. You are not Tang San and have no capital to squander. The right leg bone of the Blue Silver Emperor is not yours. The Blue Silver King sacrificed it without yours. You have to know that if Tang San doesn't have these, he will lose the Blue Silver Grass In the end, he broke up with Tang San for no reason. He was definitely petty. He hated Tang San for not giving you the Mysterious Heaven Skill. If Tang San recognizes Wild Father, just let him recognize it. You are not satisfied again. You He didn't get as much fatherly love as Tang San. After breaking up, the fairy grass is gone. Even if your Spring Autumn Cicada can cleanse the soul ring, it's useless. The brainless protagonist is still brainless even if he can go back. 500 Years of experience can't make him sane, and it's useless even if he can go back.

Blue Silver Grass absorbs the insect martial spirit that increases strength, and becomes possessed by Blue Silver! The first soul skill, blue silver powerful transformation?

I feel like I don't have the wisdom of the reborn people from Fangyuan. It's been a long time since I awakened my martial soul and I haven't noticed the characteristics of the martial soul system.

Tang San is an absolute feudalist warrior, and there is a brother who can probably serve as your slave.

After reading the first part, I can't stand it anymore It's not bad but it's so good. You wrote Xiao Wu so well, but the result is that the main character is still the Immortal Lord. I can't bear to read anymore.

Xiao Wu is not the heroine, she is just needed for the development of the plot. In addition, the pace of this book may be a bit slow in the early stages. After all, the setting is that of a model worker, not an immortal. In addition, now I have 4,000 words per day, and I will say 10,000 to 20,000 words less per day after I put it on the shelves. I am absolutely full of volume.

Fang Yuan picks up Xiao Wu? It has a kind of niche perverted beauty, okay.

I can't believe that a magic pill like Yuanzi can be used in the circle of evil soul masters of the Sun and Moon Empire to perform unbelievable operations, but due to the trial, it needs to be restrained. But it still feels very exciting

It's too bland and tasteless, so just go by the steps.