White Bone Taoist Lord

When I saw the latest chapter, I haven't read much. In my humble opinion, it's pretty good overall. It's good food, but it's Xiao He and Xiao He. It doesn't have too many poisonous points and it's not exciting at the same time. It's relatively bland. The main character is an entry-level sect, but there isn't much specific description of the sect. The writing is pretty good, but it's a little bit confusing. Fragmentation, maybe because there is no outline, I just read the book for a sense of immersion, but because it is not exciting and a bit fragmented, it is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it. The protagonist is very open, maybe it was originally arranged to let the protagonist take a side path, become a monster, and have no background, but the protagonist is obsessed with it. Without the sect, it seems confusing and has no characteristics, and the description of the battle does not allow people to immerse themselves in it. Anyway, it is just to use magic weapons and spells to kill monsters. This kind of fighting method has no sense of substitution and is not fun. I still hope to determine an outline, even if you stitch in other books, the setting, and the protagonist. It doesn't matter how you go, but how you write is important. It's time to go to the next link. Let's lay the groundwork and give us some preparations for reading books so that we can keep up with your pace. I actually don't like to post comments to teach authors how to write books, but the author said it's important to gain popularity, so I will shamelessly express my feelings.

It's too boring. I feel like I can't write a novel. (If you want to say that there is something poisonous about this book, I haven't found it after reading twenty chapters, but I dare to mix in a lot of powerful things at the beginning. This kind of writing is completely asking for death.) There may be an outline but there should be no detailed outline. Sooner or later the eunuch is a newbie's practice work.

I feel like your book should be renamed. What do you think of the name "Bone Master" 😄

Generally speaking, the whole book has some serious flaws. The plot is bland and the characters are average. It is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. Why is it a pity? Because the theme elements are well chosen. Bone Alien, to be honest, most readers are going in the general direction of [Alien]. As a [heterogene], it is not an exaggeration to say that you are not tolerated by the world. Both good and evil are displeased with you, and all races will not be of the same mind as you. So, in the early stages of the game, you can only survive in the cracks. Be careful not to expose yourself. Anyone who has seen their own background will be in trouble. Highlight one []. The protagonist's character can be both good and evil, he is cautious and decisive in his actions, and his style is clean and tidy. He may have a little kindness from his previous life, but in general he is absolutely ruthless. [Alien] To continue to develop is to strengthen all aspects of oneself, such as survival, combat power, etc. If the style is dominated by the feeling of savagery and barbarism, then the route of "breaking the situation with force" will be taken. If the style is mainly a mixture of weird and bizarre stories, you can most likely consider the direction of [Zhiwei]. Joining a sect must also refer to an evil sect that uses people as pigs and uses meat to make elixirs, or a heterogeneous gathering where all the members are wearing hair and horns. If it is a human sect, it must at least consider those who are not my race. So, it is a pity that this book may seem to the author to be very suitable for the purpose, but after entering the market, it may be a bit boring to most readers.

I feel like brothers in the comment area, I haven't read this book several times since I came in. Mainly because I saw the chapter title of City God's Dream, I thought it was some pretentious story about gods and gods. After reading it, it's not like this at all. It feels like classical cultivation of immortality. It's really good.

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Either it is a demon, or it is a demon. What is it if it is not a demon or a demon? The last four things I wrote were different

Zhuyan Baigudao? Such a familiar name

How many times have I said it, at the beginning of writing a novel, I explain the division of cultivation realms, and the strength of male pigs. I don't mention this and that, but I still talk about it. It's 10 chapters and not even a day has passed. I'm so nervous.

It's very bland, not exciting, and doesn't have any bad points. It's just that the amount of information in the front is too much, which is the opposite of the Riddler. If the amount of information is small, the author's one is only better than the outline. There is too much information, and I feel that the rhythm is a bit problematic.

I'll take a look and comment. Many book friends said it's ok

It's well written and I could read it in one sitting. There's no problem with the logic, but it's just not enough to read in one sitting. Some of the authors are very clever. The protagonist's character and strategy have not been reflected yet because he has just started. I don't know if he is a holy hypocrite or a real villain who is decisive and decisive. I don't know if he is cautious and strategizing before acting or what, but I am looking forward to the author's next performance. Come on! Voted

I should have removed the official third post of Qidian Monthly Ticket. I will leave a prediction here that this book will become popular in the future. Leave a support and photo here with Fire Tongs Liu Ming

There was an author who wrote "White Bones" that was really good. Unfortunately, he died suddenly. It's a huge pity.

He's already dead, can't he still be ambiguous?

Did you write the White Bone Taoist before? It was also a eunuch.

The plot is a bit slow. Seriously, why is it so slow to watch the Bones?

The author, please remember to be a bit evil when writing about white bones and evil ghosts. Otherwise, after you have been raised, you will find yourself in a trap and find out that you are writing about human beings.

The construction of the system is too old. It needs some new things to attract people to watch.

It's a classical immortal-cultivating style with no obvious logical flaws and a slow pace. It's just the Bones setting that I find interesting to watch.

It's good-looking, and it's not the kind of person who has a golden finger but is brainless. From entering under a false name to accepting the sect, it feels a bit like becoming a god. The details are handled well so far. It is my favorite novel about cultivating immortals.

It's pretty good, but the combat power is a bit vague and not exciting enough.

This is the only ticket I have left, I hope you can wait until it is released

The last book I read, White Bones, was still a shame. . . I read it and it's pretty good. It has a classical feel. I support it and cast two monthly votes.

Realm settings like this often don't look good in the middle of writing! It is better to use a shorter training setting, which is good for refining energy, refining spirit, and integrating Tao.

I feel good. The author must be confident and never give up, otherwise it is easy for villains to find you🙂🙂

It's been 15 chapters and it's a bit slow.