Lord of the White Bones

When I saw the latest chapter, I haven't read much. In my humble opinion, it's pretty good overall. It's good food, but it's Xiao He and Xiao He. It doesn't have too many poisonous points and it's not exciting at the same time. It's relatively bland. The main character is an entry-level sect, but there isn't much specific description of the sect. The writing is pretty good, but it's a little bit confusing. Fragmentation, maybe because there is no outline, I just read the book for a sense of immersion, but because it is not exciting and a bit fragmented, it is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it. The protagonist is very open, maybe it was originally arranged to let the protagonist take a side path, become a monster, and have no background, but the protagonist is obsessed with it. Without the sect, it seems confusing and has no characteristics, and the description of the battle does not allow people to immerse themselves in it. Anyway, it is just to use magic weapons and spells to kill monsters. This kind of fighting method has no sense of substitution and is not fun. I still hope to determine an outline, even if you stitch in other books, the setting, and the protagonist. It doesn't matter how you go, but how you write is important. It's time to go to the next link. Let's lay the groundwork and give us some preparations for reading books so that we can keep up with your pace. I actually don't like to post comments to teach authors how to write books, but the author said it's important to gain popularity, so I will shamelessly express my feelings.

It's too boring. I feel like I can't write a novel. (If you want to say that there is something poisonous about this book, I haven't found it after reading twenty chapters, but I dare to mix in a lot of powerful things at the beginning. This kind of writing is completely asking for death.) There may be an outline but there should be no detailed outline. Sooner or later the eunuch is a newbie's practice work.

I feel like your book should be renamed. What do you think of the name "Bone Master" 😄

Generally speaking, the whole book has some serious flaws. The plot is bland and the characters are average. It is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. Why is it a pity? Because the theme elements are well chosen. Bone Alien, to be honest, most readers are going in the general direction of [Alien]. As a [heterogene], it is not an exaggeration to say that you are not tolerated by the world. Both good and evil are displeased with you, and all races will not be of the same mind as you. So, in the early stages of the game, you can only survive in the cracks. Be careful not to expose yourself. Anyone who has seen their own background will be in trouble. Highlight one []. The protagonist's character can be both good and evil, he is cautious and decisive in his actions, and his style is clean and tidy. He may have a little kindness from his previous life, but in general he is absolutely ruthless. [Alien] To continue to develop is to strengthen all aspects of oneself, such as survival, combat power, etc. If the style is dominated by the feeling of savagery and barbarism, then the route of "breaking the situation with force" will be taken. If the style is mainly a mixture of weird and bizarre stories, you can most likely consider the direction of [Zhiwei]. Joining a sect must also refer to an evil sect that uses people as pigs and uses meat to make elixirs, or a heterogeneous gathering where all the members are wearing hair and horns. If it is a human sect, it must at least consider those who are not my race. So, it is a pity that this book may seem to the author to be very suitable for the purpose, but after entering the market, it may be a bit boring to most readers.

How many times have I said it, at the beginning of writing a novel, I explain the division of cultivation realms, and the strength of male pigs. I don't mention this and that, but I still talk about it. It's 10 chapters and not even a day has passed. I'm so nervous.

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I feel like brothers in the comment area, I haven't read this book several times since I came in. Mainly because I saw the chapter title of City God's Dream, I thought it was some pretentious story about gods and gods. After reading it, it's not like this at all. It feels like classical cultivation of immortality. It's really good.

Either it is a demon, or it is a demon. What is it if it is not a demon or a demon? The last four things I wrote were different

After reading three chapters, the plot is still okay and the writing is okay, but the characterization is lagging behind. This is a common flaw of many authors. To advance the plot, you cannot push it hard. It must be based on the character characteristics and behavioral logic of the protagonist. This is more reasonable and has a sense of substitution. Some authors are so ambitious that they cannot portray a protagonist well. After reading a few chapters, readers have no impression of the protagonist and are still delusional about writing group portraits. That is even more idiotic 🙂

Zhuyan Baigudao? Such a familiar name