In the World of The Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, but I Transmigrated Twenty Years Early

Emei Kungfu is great! So good! Emei Kung Fu is great! Awesome! I am the Nine Yang Kung, the invincible Nine Yang Kung! You are Emei Palm, I am Emei Palm!

There are three great adventures in Yang Guo's internal power. One is the five-level skill, the other is the cold jade bed in the ancient tomb, and the third is the snake gall in the Xiangyang Sword Tomb. When the snake gall arrives in Xiangyang, it cannot let go of Dugu Qiufei's sharp sword, which is just right for the protagonist. After that, he goes to the ancient tomb to borrow the cold jade bed from Yang Guo's descendants.

If the people from the Ancient Tomb Sect saw this, they would definitely think that their ancestors were resurrected! Will think of Yang Guo's reincarnation!

Moreover, she doesn't even know where Peach Blossom Island is, or the plan to slay the dragon in heaven. It has been revised over and over again. As long as she knows the martial arts of Peach Blossom Island, the Emei Sect's martial arts intentions cannot be so low. Some people have said that the purpose of establishing the sect is It is for the survival of his own Taoist tradition, so he cannot use the martial arts he created to teach. However, it is very funny that Emei's inherited mental method is the incomplete Nine Yang Kung. Since the incomplete Nine Yang Kung can be used to modify the martial arts of Peach Blossom Island for preaching, it is very funny. Why don't you learn some martial arts and create new ones? The result is that the Emei sect has no foundation in Taohua Island martial arts, let alone the Nine Yin Manual. They say that Guo Xiang is talented in martial arts, but if she is talented in martial arts, it is impossible for Huang Rong not to be Through her Jiuyin, even Xiao Wu and Xiao Wu knew the martial arts of Peach Blossom Island and Dragon Subduing. As the "most favored little daughter with a high talent in martial arts", there was no trace of her own martial arts 😎😎 Da Longnu

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. The author still fails to understand that the fun part of this book is the Yang Guo template and the original plot characters. If you ask me, just jump to the timeline instead of writing those meaningless original plots and characters. The writing is average, and what you wrote is not good-looking. I have to write it.

Like the title, it's just average. If readers had never eaten fine bran ten years ago, they would have thought your idea was okay. It's a pity that the writing is not top-notch, and the data is generally normal despite the decline of martial arts. . And it's embarrassing if your timeline is not up and down. In the early years, you can touch the tail of the divine eagle, and Guo Xiang is in his prime. In the later years, you can take over Yitian, which is just a wave of love and murder between the six major sects and the Mingjiao. You can't even rebel at this point in time. It's too far away from the collapse of the Yuan Dynasty and the people are in dire straits, and the Tatar army's combat effectiveness is still strong. . You have written 20 or 30 chapters in Emei, which are both detailed and concise. The protagonist is either learning martial arts or on the way to learn martial arts. Before he has mastered it, he has to compete with Kunlun, and he has to go down the mountain to uphold justice and protect his senior sister. Do you really think of yourself as a nuclear-powered donkey? ? And if your martial arts skills are so weak, why are you dancing like this? The elders of Emei are not dead yet, right?

Should we block Zhang Wuji's spring?

The plot begins with Yu Daiyan being deposed, Zhang Sanfeng's ninetieth birthday, and Zhang Cuishan living on Ice and Fire Island. These things happened within one year. Twenty years before the plot begins, that is when Zhang Sanfeng was seventy years old. Guo Xiang is four years older than Zhang Sanfeng, and would be seventy-four years old at this time (if he is still alive). When Zhang Wuji met Master Miejie in Butterfly Valley, Master Tai was about forty-five years old, that is, when Zhang Sanfeng was one hundred years old, Miexie was forty years old. When the plot started, Miejie was thirty years old, and Master Fengling might still be alive! Twenty years have passed since the plot began, and the extinction has just been ten years old. First of all, Mie Mie had never met Guo Xiang. Mie Mie had been a disciple of Emei for many years and Guo Xiang had died many years ago. Mie Mie had been a disciple of Emei since he was a child. He met his senior brother Gu Hongzi and made a private commitment to him for the rest of his life. Later, when Gu Hongzi died, Mie Mie became a monk. He no longer became a lay disciple and officially became a nun. During this period, Yan Ming must have been in his twenties and was hurt by love. After all, the older he was, he would definitely be married to Gu Hongzi. So the bug is that I didn't see Guo Xiang when I was about 10 years old. Guo Xiang must have been dead for many years. Twenty years before the plot started, I was about ten years old, so Guo Xiang had been dead for many years by this time! ! It is absolutely impossible to teach the protagonist to practice martial arts! !

There is a question. Twenty years ago in Yitian, Yang Guo was not dead yet. . . How did you decide this time?

Look at you! Even though he pretends to be a time traveler, he actually has quite a lot of ambition! You actually want to write about traditional martial arts? The writing is just okay, but the pace is slow and stiff! You can't control the rhythm at all and write wherever you want. The problem is that your strength cannot support your ambition! I recommend you learn to swordsmanship in the Tang Dynasty. The essence of fan fiction is to practice your skills. Don't put yourself on such a high pedestal. The characters you create are too rigid and stereotyped.