Xiaoyue Zhonglu

Like an essay, not like a web article ————Dividing line———— (づ ●─● )づQidian's new book "Infinite Reading End Bone Rider Won't Let Me Clear the Game" Looking forward to your recommendation, evaluation, and collection

Uncle, I take the liberty to ask. Do you usually read online articles? It is recommended to stop writing and read the online article first. When I posted this, you updated 14,000 words. Not a word. Whether there are other people in the picture or not, you can still write a straightforward narrative. Maybe this is not a web article. I won't comment. From the perspective of a web article, it's not that there's anything wrong with your book, it's that it's hard to find any good points. Rhythm, network sense, story, plot, logic, conflict, hook, suspense, world view foreshadowing, characters, setting. It doesn't matter what you want. Above.

I took a look at it from Writer's Assistant. There's no need to change it, so just delete it all and go look for some free tutorials online.