Become a Demon God from the Secret Martial Arts

Rating: Liang Cao is a bit of a drag on relationships; the protagonist is always looked down upon by a bunch of people when he makes a move, and then talks trash for a long time; the dance scene is a bit too pretentious. But overall it's okay, there's nothing else wrong with it

Most of them are not good-looking. I came into contact with the crescent moon concept in Secret Martial Arts after a few pictures at the beginning, but after adding points, I didn't think about it. After adding points, I started to make classic taunts. The coach also used a loudspeaker like: The whole audience is looking at me. Let me announce something. There is a genius here, and I can get started in three days. I also practice archery with my sister, I have an appointment, and this kind of plot happens again, and then I waste my potential to improve my archery skills, it's like a joke

Come on! Don't give up, I'll give you the monthly pass.

There is no sense of immersion. It is not a matter of the name. The descriptions of the fighting, actions, language, and text in the following days are pale, and it is really impossible to watch. As for AI's novels about the Republic of China, they are more interesting than yours, with only a dozen comments. Learn how to write like Gungun, Leader, etc. When fighting, you have to be patient, shady, or scheming. A bland western fantasy without any extra points would be overflowing at 700,000 to 800,000 words.

I asked why I didn't see it. The protagonist in this book gave me the feeling of a child who hasn't grown up yet. After clearly awakening his past memories, I think his personality must be at least like that of an adult. When someone says something to him, he immediately scolds him. The author describes him as being like a child. The writing is so childish and the dialogue is so casual that I can only speak in a novice way. The dialogue in the plot is rather sloppy.

Your first few chapters are too similar to Journey into Mystery

Why do you always have brainless settings about growing taller? This kind of nonsense setting is too offensive to people, don't write it. There are so many books with this kind of mindless setting that no one reads them more and more.

The beginning of this is a bit like the mysterious journey of Get Out Come on, come up with your own style, don't write those old routines, just be more poisonous

Did the author write without using his brain? Sign the contract first and then test it, and you will receive a one-month subsidy the next day. Everyone knows that you can get a bargain by going to an antique store, but there's only one store?

It will be over if one of them doesn't die, not even the Nantianmen soldiers will die.

The plot is okay, but there are some typos from time to time, and the names of the protagonist's sister and her classmates are confused more than once, which somewhat affects the reading experience 😐

Due to various reasons, the quality of this book in Chapters 65-91 is relatively poor, and there are many loopholes. New book friends can choose to skip reading, and the plot after it is released will basically not have much to do with it.

The dense crystal has been absorbed, can it no longer be sold? It didn't say that it would be bad if it absorbed the dense crystal!

Based on the setting of the dense martial arts tyrant created by Gokai, except for Gray Tombstone, which can finish the book, the others don't even seem to have more than a hundred chapters. And the mysterious copy of Miwu has more than 200 chapters, even if it is copied, it is not enough. It is very strange Author, can you persist? How much length do you plan to write?