Calamity Sovereign

Have you prepared an outline this time?

The author has a new book now, so you must be careful not to do it on the side. If you do it now, you will almost die suddenly. Like Xiaolangjun, chaos, etc. Are all lessons learned from the past. Now this is the biggest thunder point.

Qin Yi is equivalent to having Su Hui since he was a child, but because of his brain disease, he can only have a partial window of awakening. At other times, he is a fool, uncontrollable, and has no memory. Every time he regains consciousness, he has to face unfamiliar environments and bad conditions. This may indeed lead to fear of the world, extreme self-interest, and a perverted desire for control because of the uncontrollability of his life, but the protagonist is too naive. Maybe Hakimi enjoyed writing it himself, and felt that Qin Yi's setting was well established. He was immersed in his own world and didn't know what the world was. But because of the education they have received and the gentleness of human nature, readers are extremely disgusted with such an extremely selfish person who plays with other people's feelings. No reader would stay with a growth story like Haji Mi's story, in which a person is gradually influenced and becomes emotional. If Akaishi is red for a moment, can he be red for the rest of his life?

The male protagonist's character is too bloodless. What are you doing living like this, just to live a simple life? It looks so uncomfortable

In the nine-year compulsory education, there is no basic moral outlook. At least, it should be neutral and kind. This way of treating the people around you as a tool, throwing it away after use, "disposing" of those who are out of control, and putting yourself first, can people really like it? It's not impossible to recreate the palace maid's strangulation. In addition, does the male protagonist really travel through time with this style of behavior? Isn't this purely local?

Let me tell you my personal opinion (it just means that I don't like it and don't criticize it). What can I say? The beginning is still amazing, but personally I can't accept the character of the protagonist. This does not mean that the male protagonist of the online novel must be more holy and loving. I think it's okay to be indifferent to enemies and strangers, and I admire this kind of male protagonist who is decisive in killing and can achieve great things. But for a female protagonist who only has you in her heart and all her eyes are on you, it's full of indifference and impersonality. I personally can't accept this kind of value. I think it's OK to treat enemies and strangers no matter how you treat them. Treating your own people and someone who only has eyes for you is still full of calculations. I can only say that it's a bit too naive. I think I am I'm not a good person, but I personally can't accept this kind of value, and I can't put it into the author's mind. Some people may like it. After all, it's hard to agree with everyone, and I personally can't represent other people's aesthetics. I write this comment just to catch up on updates in the past few days, to give myself an explanation, and to give a thumbs up to new book friends who have the same aesthetic taste as me. I don't want to go against my will and wish this article a good sale, but I hope we can see each other again.

I followed "Fairy" in my sophomore year of high school. At that time, I was living in the dormitory and were not allowed to bring mobile phones. Every time I took computer class, I would secretly search pirated websites to read it. Once a week, if there was not much update, I would read the previous chapters two or three times. When I got home from vacation, I used my own account to replenish subscriptions and monthly passes. Finally, I stumbled across all the subscriptions, and also bought the event peripherals for this book, serial number 001. During the time when the college entrance examination was about to take place, the school was not very strict. I borrowed the mobile phone brought by my classmates and secretly watched "Fairy" at night. However, the author's updates were really annoying. I had an early self-study at 5.30 And could only re-read it again and again at 3:00. When I got to college, I read "Fairy" twice more. Because of this book, I also came up with the idea of ​​writing online articles. I tried it for a while in my sophomore year, and signed two books through internal investment. The results were half good, but I still didn't stick to one book after that. It wasn't that I didn't want to write, but I really couldn't write it and didn't know what to write. At that time, I was shocked to realize that writing a book was difficult. I thought of the days when I used to scold me for not having enough updates, and I felt relieved. In a blink of an eye, now I am about to graduate in my junior year of college. Perhaps I will never forget Ran Qingmo's cool and cool nature. She is so in line with my childhood fantasy of a heroine. She is not as tacky as other novels. She is either the unruly and indulgent daughter, or the quirky and eccentric children of the world, or she is so violent that she is inhumane. In my opinion, those are not heroines, but vulgar bitches. In short, "Fairy, Please Hear My Explanation" has left me with so many memories and so many emotions, so come on for the new book~

If the first chapter is somewhat intriguing, the rest is baffling. The setting of the protagonist, the sister, a few dead people and monsters, and the vague world are simply boring and boring.

As the title states, the plot does not need to be as big as the world view of the book, but the heroine must not be left behind 🙂

Since there are few people in the author's family, he can just say it directly, we can understand it.