Dark Duel! The Loser Becomes a Card!

How to put it this way, the plot of this book gave me the feeling that the content of an entire season of animation has been compressed into dozens of chapters. To use the Yu-Gi-Oh animation as a metaphor, it is a game in the duel kingdom. Just after defeating Ryuzaki, the brainwashed thief Keith brought the Thousand-Eyed Naji Demon given by Becas to fight. Then the game backhand printed Zhang Tianlong and sprayed the Thousand-Eyed Naji Demon to death, and incidentally also sprayed Becas behind the scenes to death.

You first think about how many chapters you want to write, say 500. Then break down the most awesome deck into ten small levels. The deck will advance once every fifty chapters or so. Upgrade to the highest level before the decisive battle. Generally speaking, later upgrades will be faster because less can be written. To be honest, I already have a headache just watching the battle. The deck iteration is too fast and the intensity is too high. It is still a brand new deck. It is too tiring to read for a dabbler like me who has played but is not proficient. You don't even write down what cards you have in your initial hand. Basically, I can only watch the protagonist's actions, and I can't plan how to play in my own mind.

There is always some English behind the card names, and the fighting-like card explanation reminds me of my friends who played Yu-Gi-Oh before, and the hierarchy system is a bit unclear. The title of this novel reminds me that if you fail, you will become a girl 🙂

It would be good to write this setting as butter🤔

Let me summarize it feels like I don't know who I am, I don't know where I am, I only know that there are dogs and donkeys barking at me, and I want to kill them

The pace is too fast, one conflict after another, too fast. Also, isn't it said that if you don't print a tax card or pay a tax card for a long time, you will become a pariah and will be printed as a tax card by others? It is also said that three-star duelists will only lose one star if they fail in a duel, the winner will only take one card from the loser, and non-pariahs cannot be forced to duel. Aren't these settings you threw up yourself? Why does the protagonist challenge others, others cannot refuse, and if he loses, he will immediately GG? Is this right? Then, one conflict followed another, and the reasons and causes of the conflicts were inconsistently written, and the rhythm was obviously wrong.

Is it okay to use Chinese for offense and defense? The current listening effect is not good

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