Human Massacre in the Northern Expedition

If you use AI, just say you use AI. If you can't write, just say you can't write. Why post it online and let us see how proud you are? 🤔🤔🤔

The first one is that you don't have a sense of involvement. The second one is that you don't have that professionalism. The third one is that you can't even write a story, and the compositions written by primary school students have a sense of story better than yours. The fourth one is that I have seen many authors say, are you writing reflections? What are your thoughts after reading your novel? Or are you teaching me how to read your novel? No. 5: If you write in the first person, you must carry the first person through to the end. If you want to write in the third person, you must carry the third person through to the end. Is that okay? Number 6: I saw someone say that you are using the historical narrative method, but after you read the narrative method of historical stories for a long time, you will find that he also has his own unique sense of substitution To summarize, your ability is not good, and I suspect that your composition from elementary school to high school is very poor. Narrating in a historical way also requires a lot of skills. Off topic, the author has never even written a novel, right? With your three-legged cat skills, you can still imitate Sima Qian! Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha burp

I call this book the strongest No. 1 On the Jiahao list. Do you have any objections? What Jiahao sword dance is so popular?

I came to see Jiahao, so pure

It's so magical hahaha

That group of editors signed this book. I would like to give it a reward and put it on the new book list.

I came here because of Douyin's reputation, 🙂🙂🙂

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I came here because of Douyin's reputation. I originally thought that Jiahao was already the king of this world, but I didn't expect that there was someone more brave than him. Who are you? Is there another realm above Jiahao? What, Bai Qi? ! Is this the realm above Jiahao?

The pride is in the sky, who can compete with me?

For those who haven't read books: I'm a great writer, you're a master! Those who have read the book: There is no subject, predicate and object, the Riddler is left alone, and the cerebellar development is malformed. Hard loading [confused]

Why don't you just copy the historical records~ It made me laugh to death. Hahaha—— I don't need to think at all, as long as there is a fragment, just copy it, just write those hundred words back and forth. I can only say that he is another person who is praised by al... Tsk tsk tsk🥱🥱🥱

You don't even have a cover. One of the two books has 25,000 words, and the other has 49,000 words. Oh my god, are you really crazy about writing? Writing novels is just for fun, right?

After reading five chapters, the author wanted to write something compelling, but the six most basic elements of the story were not clearly explained, so it was just for fun.

I feel that the author has actually put a lot of effort into writing, but it doesn't read like a historical record. "So King Xiang got on his horse, and more than 800 of his strong warriors and servants under his command broke through the siege at night and went south and galloped away. At dawn, the Han army was aware of it and ordered the cavalry general Guan Ying to pursue it with five thousand horses. King Xiang crossed the Huaihe River, and there were more than a hundred people who could ride on it. When King Xiang went to Yinling, he lost his way and asked Yitian's father. Tian Fuling said "Left" On the left, he was trapped in the swamp, and the old Han Dynasty pursued him. King Xiang then led his troops to the east, and there were twenty-eight cavalry. The Han cavalry was chasing thousands of people. King Xiang said to his cavalry: "It has been eight years since I set up my army. I have fought more than seventy times, and I have defeated all those I attacked. I have never been defeated." However, if we are trapped here today, the reason why we will be killed here is not because of war. Today I will fight to the death, and I hope that I will fight quickly for you, and I will definitely win three times. I will break the siege for you, behead the generals, and cut down the flag, so that you will know that God will destroy me, and it is not a crime of war. Then he divided his cavalry into four teams, facing each other in four directions. The Han army surrounded them heavily. King Xiang said to his cavalry, "I am the Duke and I will take one of the other generals." "He ordered his cavalry to ride down from all sides, with three places in Shandong. So King Xiang shouted and galloped down, and the Han army was invincible, so he killed a Han general. At that time, Chiquanhou was a cavalry commander and chased King Xiang. King Xiang scolded him with angry eyes. Chiquanhou's men and horses were all frightened. Several miles away. The Han army did not know where King Xiang was, so they divided their troops into three and surrounded him again. King Xiang killed one of the Han captains and killed several hundred people. He then gathered his cavalry and said to him, "What's wrong?" "The riders all fell down and said, "It's just like the king said. "" I feel that this paragraph is very consistent with the author's concept of viewing from a spectator's point of view, which can depict the characters. The author's classical Chinese writing is too easy to understand. Maybe he wants to learn the prose of the Tongcheng School? "The mountain is more rocky and less soil. The stone is gray and black, mostly square and less round. There are few trees, many pines, and stone grates, all with flat tops. There is ice and snow, no waterfalls, and no traces of birds and animals. There are no trees within several miles of the solstice, and the snow is as deep as a person's knees." The emotional color is even lighter. Perhaps the author wanted to be lyrical. "King Qu Pingji is not smart when he listens to it. The frame-up obscures the light. The evil song harms the public. The uprightness is not tolerated. Therefore, he writes "Li Sao" with sorrow and meditation. "Li Sao" means "living worries". Husband and Heaven are the beginning of human beings; parents are the foundation of human beings. When people are poor, they turn against their roots, so they work hard. When you are extremely tired and tired, you don't have to call out to heaven; when you are sick and miserable, you don't have to call out to your parents. Qu Ping followed the right path and served his emperor with all his loyalty and wisdom. He was so poor that he could be trusted but be doubted and be loyal but be slandered. How could he be without resentment? Qu Ping's "Li Sao" is based on self-pity. , "Xiaoya" is full of complaints but not chaos. It can be said that it is both "Emperor Ku" and "Qi Huan" in the lower level, and it is a reference to Tang and Wu. The meaning is far-reaching because of its purity. It is honest in its conduct, so it is not allowed to die. In the mud, the cicada is sloughed out of the filthy dust, and does not get the dirt of the world. It is a person who promotes this ambition, even if it competes with the sun and the moon.

Does the author know what a hatchet is? Dare to put it on the knee, then Bai Qi is also a good person. If he moves casually or gets up casually without paying attention, he will cut off a piece of meat! When I was a child, I saw someone using this to chop someone, and the leg really fell off with one chop (viewed from a distance).

I use AI to write, and I still think I'm focusing on details. I'm a fool.