My Cohabitation Life with a Sick Girl

As I commented, I am stuck in self-excitement and cannot extricate myself. First of all, let me talk about what I saw in the first chapter: A boy was hiding from a sickly girl and was caught. Advantages: Not much need to remember names. Disadvantages (personal opinion): 1. If you don't look at the work, it's like guessing riddles. The first thing to write a novel is not to hold it up, but to put it down. What you write is a web article and a romance. Why are you holding it back like that? Throughout the article, he and she. 2. Logic Written like a detective, why don't you go to class? It's too deliberate. This deliberateness is like writing the words "I have a strong character" on my face. The overbearing president is a human being after all, and what you write does not look like a living person. 3. Three Golden Chapters It doesn't match at all, you are too proud of yourself. As for the four questions at the beginning, forget it. Finally, novel writing is about telling stories, not presenting them, not presenting riddles. To tell a good story, good foreshadowing and strong characters are not hidden, let alone revealed. Instead, they give more information. Above.