1978: Joining the Army Begins as a Correspondent

The book is okay. It's just the historical knowledge that needs to be replenished. The 1978 Laoshan mineral water is barely passable. After all, a teacher at the level can drink it. But after being supported by a rich woman and entering the entertainment industry, are you serious about writing chronicles? There is also the cousin who talks about underground boxing abroad all day long. In such a closed era, this person would be looking for shit.

If you are not a division commander's correspondent, you will be at the deputy battalion level, which is also awesome. A recruit will be directly at the major level. Even if your father is a marshal, he would not dare to upgrade so blatantly.

Without the life experience of that era, the writing would not have a sense of time, and the writing would be very rough.

When I saw Hong Quan, I gave up the book. It doesn't matter how awesome you are, just look at any place where fighting and fighting can be used, whether it's military, police, or ring competition, just ask where there is a place where martial arts can be used to show off one's prowess. As for the streets, I just lie down on the ground, how can I earn back a Tesla and practice martial arts? After practicing hard, wait for the police station to rule on a fight?

Period writing is not like period writing. Military writing is not like military writing. It is better to write period military writing in the short style of urban parents. Anyway, it looks beautiful and feels awkward. The detailed description is not well written. The one-stroke summary is a little wordy. The writing is too white. There are a lot of faults. There is basically no description of characterization and emotional resonance. The only advantage is that the track is right. Not many people write military writing about this era. Let's just leave it at that.

How long has it been going on for a trivial matter about gangsters, and yet you still need to get a first-class merit award? What kind of retarded plot is this?

I just started writing and finished reading it in one go. I won't spoil the story without spoiling it, but there are too many minor flaws. The subject, object, and subject are often misplaced, and the subject description of the upper and lower dialogues is misplaced. It feels like AI is filling the frame. I'm a little sorry for such a high monthly ticket.

The author doesn't know much about the daily life of the army and that era, so he should just write about war. He doesn't know a lot of common sense.

The evaluation is that after drinking and staying up late to work as a clerk, I became confused and fantasized.

I have read 120 chapters, let me tell you a few problems 1: There are too many typos in the wrong sentences, and some sentences have to be read upside down 2: I feel that the protagonist has never read a book in his previous life. The setting of the National University of Defense Technology has no effect so far, and it is very distracting 3: Regarding the plot of the heroine, with two love lines, there is no way to have two heroines 4: Please add to the next book friend

A little bit poisonous: 1978 bottled mineral water

This introduction is really stupid to avoid future troubles. Who are you silencing? To avoid future troubles... Do you know how to use idioms?

I would like to make some suggestions. If you have time, read your own writing from the beginning. There are too many typos in various sentences. There can be several in one chapter. Then check the relevant information carefully. You can completely change the ones that do not affect the plot outline, and it will not take much time.

Did the author want a eunuch? I have been interrupted several times so that no one can follow me.

Author, you are slacking off, but I have been chasing you. Come on.

Just three chapters? The end of this chapter means I'm going to write two more chapters. If that's the case, I'll have no choice but to unpin the book. Don't blame the brothers for not reading it until then. It doesn't matter how many chapters you wrote before it was released. Why is there so much content after it's released?

The upgrade was a little faster. In that era, the value of first-class merit was not as high as in modern times. To put it bluntly, it was just finished.

There are too many typos. If you can't use AI to proofread it, it will be fine. It will affect reading too much.