Swallowing the Starry Sky: I Have a Way to Journey to the West

Damn it, a third-turn golden elixir only increased my strength by 3000kg Why is Journey to the West so bad?

Writing about family is like shit. If you can't write about family, don't write about family. It would be better to just let the protagonist be an orphan. The protagonist was running for his life outside. When he called, he was scolded. The key danger was caused by that family member. I was speechless.

There are too many flaws 1. The middle-level war god who has made enemies kills the high lord, but he still doesn't have the black god suit. 2. Send the God of War team to pick up the protagonist. When you see the protagonist fighting a medium warrior monster, you are still there and commenting that you are not the person you are looking for. Have you not seen the recorded video, or have you not seen the protagonist's photo? If you don't know the person, just pick it up.

The power conversion on both sides is also very harmonious! Just hope you don't lick it! Personally, I want to see a pure protagonist struggling in Devour! Luo Feng doesn't need a protagonist to be a lord! Coupled with the resources exposed by the protagonist, Luo Feng will grow faster! So I guess that's enough! Well written, cheers!

The author is angry with both humans and demons, please update quickly

The pace is too slow, not enjoyable at all

The rhythm is okay. It's too fast and it's easy to jump. Take your time. To have that feeling, it can't be like a running account.