Witcher: Restoration Warlock of the Gryphon School

The daily writing is a bit bad, as pretentious and arrogant as those light novels

There is a problem with the setting, depriving the other party of their ability or talent, harming others and benefiting oneself is called plundering. If it does not affect the other party, it should be called copying. There is also a sudden appearance of proficiency in seals. It was not there when I learned the first five seals. It suddenly appeared when I was learning the last one. If you really have this ability, you should set it up at the beginning. Ability including swordsmanship, alchemy, etc. Must be added, and then give a complete panel, not just the ability to reply. If you are afraid of being criticized, you can refer to a book I read before, just post the panel as a picture.

Why do you think this pig's feet look like a child? Suddenly look like an adult? His tone of voice is childish

Just write well, and just when you feel good, Mirror Master suddenly feels sick, as if you have eaten a mouthful of shit, and you can't swallow it and can't spit it out.

It is no longer fashionable to use explosive seeds to counterattack, now it is Gou Dao who takes the lead.

Originally, the book club said that the main character was pretentious, arrogant, and a child, which would not affect my reading, but when the reply cooled down, I couldn't hold it in anymore. It was still at the critical moment of life and death. You told me that after using the reply once, it was still cooling down, so the injury could not be recovered. The original anime doesn't have this restriction, right? Use it if you want

Then the Iron Guard joins, either directly or not, but in the end, some poor girl with a conscience joins, directly lowering the rank.

The advantage is that there is no pulling, it is just a cool article. Disadvantages: abrupt transitions and too naive dialogue.        ，，，

What have you written in the last few posts? If it doesn't work, ask the AI ​​to give you an outline.

I think the writing is okay, keep up the good work 🤭

The author should change the way he writes. Except for the first sentence at the beginning, which clearly indicates that it was said by the sorceress, the remaining three sentences can only be guessed. There are four consecutive sentences and we cannot hear who said them. The author does not mark his name. Sometimes I feel that it is said by one person. (Four sentences, without marking the names of who said them, we can only rely on guessing, and we don't know whether they were all talking to each other or narrated by one person.)

Everyone is welcome to come here and point out the poisonous points. I will try my best to correct them if I can. I can also make suggestions. Forget about the writing style and so on. I also like to read Western fantasy, but when I started the book, I didn't intend to write a serious Western fantasy. The original The Witcher was too frustrating.

Does the Master also need to start learning from the Dharma Seal?

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It's hard to comment. It has been accelerating since Sintra. Is it necessary to write it so fast? Especially the lord part is really indescribably chaotic and strange.

Isn't the plot too watery recently, and the updates are too slow?