Douluo Dalu: Twin Spider Emperors, Bibi Dong Reveres Me as Her Father

Rubbish novel, I am Shen Nong, it's too poisonous, run away quickly

I'll probably write a few more chapters before deleting them, it's the same old routine 😒

Bibi Dong is still stronger. If you don't accept the turtle, you will become even more turtle🤣

Oh, yes, and this is a male channel. You are not writing a story about eunuchs without a female protagonist. The same story is ambiguous, but the male protagonist deceives himself and does not have a formal relationship. This kind of character image seems very irresponsible. Facing the hot feelings of female characters, he showed no indifference. Those who read novels are ordinary people, not saints. Liu Yifei, who has eyes for you, is crazy about pursuing you, and she is not a eunuch. How could she not be tempted? If you really travel through time and see Bibi Dong, you will fall in love at first sight. This is a male channel, and you are writing a harem novel. It is difficult to bring the protagonist's character into the same character as that of a saint. This is the case in several books.

The timeline in which those who came to Bibi Dong could escape was already after they were forced.

I hope that the plot between Qian Renxue and Xiao Nanfeng will be rounded out later. It seems quite suspicious when I read it at the moment. Give Xiaoxue a good ending 🙏🙏🙏

The plot and ideas are very good, but the character of the male protagonist is not well created. It always feels a bit like a female channel. The author's previous books also have good ideas and plots, and the male protagonist's personality is a bit like a female channel. Also, the character of the male protagonist is inexplicable. At least there must be some foreshadowing, why did an earthling become like this? Even if it is written that he was depressed on earth, it would be fine. Also, these books are unsystematic, and without a system, if people on earth really travel through the past, they will not be so evil at first. They will use their foresight and the advantage of reading novels. However, the author's words say that it is time travel, and it is rare to see the author using his foresight to plan.

It's a very good fan novel. I hope the author will keep writing it, and good people will live a safe life.

Although it's very poisonous, it looks interesting haha

Are you sure that's a serious way of getting along with him? Have you made a mistake? To be a good senior, you must have the majesty of the seniors and the way of getting along with them. What are you doing like a gangster?