Jujutsu Kaisen: Starting with Corpse Manipulation

In fact, I feel that it is not suitable to write a long story about a spell-return fanfic. Now, in order to write a longer story, it is not a good choice to choose a period with 5t5, because there is at least a 78-year vacuum period between 5t5 and the emergence of Japanese knotweed. During this period, no matter how you write, it will be a little tasteless, because the most beautiful thing about spells is the characters in the original work punching each other, and you can't do it in this period, because you can't meet the conditions for death and return. Unless you let the plot go crazy and advance the plot through some conditions, you can only skip Dafa, but after skipping, who else can compete with the protagonist who has been developed for so long, so the best spell fan I have seen recently in Qidian is a copy of Zhutianliu's spell.

There's something wrong with the pacing. It's only been a few days since I traveled through time. I've been skipping levels and fighting bosses. The world of magic is more dangerous than Gotham.

The writing insists on focusing on cultivating immortality, which is so embarrassing. Two more sentences of Taoist philosophy are more comfortable to read than the sentence on the left about cultivating immortality and the right sentence on cultivating immortality 😅

If I hear the jokes about the New Three Kingdoms again, I will poke my ears to the point of deafness.

To be honest, the six eyes are somewhat useful. If you don't have the six eyes and just rely on unlimited spells, you may not even be as good as Xia Youjie. Just like the original ten shadow spells, Moxuluo is the most useful, and the others are almost useless at special and super special levels.

In fact, I think it's okay in person, but the introduction really persuades me to quit.

Have you killed three corpses? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted (?

To be honest, the writing style is indeed good, but it is too dense. From the beginning to the next dozens of chapters, I kept reading 😅, which made me feel numb and tired. I really need to control the rhythm.

To be honest, the three corpses are the core. As for the shadow warlock or others, it doesn't matter if you replace any one of them. Any magic outside the core is just an extension.

The writing is okay, but there is one thing I really can't bear. The writing is too verbose. I have to explain everything, but I can't do anything.