I'm Here to Be a Superhero, and You Want Me to Stay in the Office?

After reading a few chapters, I felt that the protagonist's thinking was a bit like that of a child.

There are too few updates, and the shortcomings are infinitely magnified.

The author may not have discovered his own problem. I won't talk about the character of the male protagonist. I spent almost a week talking about some wild (ljhl) plots to lock up the male protagonist. To be honest, when the protagonist returns to the room, I have to react to who the woman is and I have almost forgotten who that woman is. Invincible flow should be limited to basic operations. This story arrangement actually reminds me of an old book called Invincible Leisure (off topic). Invincible flow means that the focus of the story has changed from the growth of strength and combat to the plot and the charm of the characters, so I think it should be developed in this aspect. Of course, the author must also remember that the readers' opinions cannot interfere with his own creation, and he cannot listen to the readers' words. I am only conveying my opinions.

After reading thirty chapters, I gave it a try. 🎭 Character: Yu Chun, a male college student, only has super strength but lacks super wisdom 🎬 Plot: As the protagonist's IQ goes up, the plot is very flat. After punching Super Earth, he cautiously did nothing ✒️ Writing style: Average It's tasteless to eat, it seems like a pity to abandon...