The Wind of Civil Engineering and Rivers and Lakes Rises in Xiangyang

It turns out that the senior civil engineering student came to write the article hahaha. The first one is that there are too many misused and redundant descriptions, and the AI ​​flavor is too strong. The main reason is that everything written by the AI ​​is just description, which is very meaningless and cannot advance the plot. It's best to have two or three plot points in a chapter, and the opening chapter should be especially catchy. The second is the plot issue. There is a saying called "Writing seems to look at the mountains but not the plains." After reading about seven or eight chapters, the protagonist did not encounter any crisis, the plot had no ups and downs, and it felt like a running account. Internet articles are different from serious literature. There must be an attractive hook at the beginning. For example, at the beginning it is about lovers breaking up (you have read the song "Ding Feng Bao", I put on the lights in my dream), there is a problem with the construction quality of the project, some leader comes to inspect, and other plots that can reflect the crisis, and then it starts to focus on how the bishop solves this crisis, and the solution to this crisis must be solved in some beautiful ways, and then the hook at the beginning is there. The third thing is to pay attention to the rhythm and the details. There are many things that are unnecessary to write in this full text, which only reflects the main characters. The character design is still a bit flat. The AI ​​characters have no personality and cannot reflect the human personality at all. In fact, you can also arrange the plot in the article according to the personalities of the people in the project department...

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