A Completion Plan for Demi-Human Girls in Another World

🎭 Character design: The male protagonist is too passive towards the female protagonists. The female protagonists put him on the bed without even touching the male protagonist. The interactive plot is basically pushed by the female protagonist, which is a bit like Japanese Asashi, but the male protagonist also has the ambition to become a god. 🎬 Plot: Nothing to say, good or bad. I personally hope that in the later period, more stories will be written about the protagonist trying to improve himself and expand his power (harem), which not only meets the needs of readers, but also fits the protagonist's need to become a god. ✒️Writing: As a new author, the author can be called excellent, and the fluency of the last few chapters is much better than the beginning. I believe the author has a high ability to improve. The summary is that in any male video article, the male protagonist's character is the top priority and must be polished. The author should pay more attention to it. Also, I don't know if the author reads the comment section. The previous book I read was obviously just a small chapter. The author said that he didn't read the comment section for several days because he saw the bad reviews. He did not modify the chapter content and response rhythm in time. As a result, the subscription rate doubled compared to similar books. The first order was cut in half, so the eunuch happened.

A post for you (Cat Girl), I hope you survive this winter

I've shared it with you in my five QQ groups. It's well written. Don't cut it 🤓

It feels like it was written by a young virgin or someone who was in love. The question of whether to do something or not is actually not that complicated. It has nothing to do with love, liking, human etiquette, etc. It is just about whether or not to think about it. Throughout the whole article, the article is still struggling with whether to do it or not. It really seems both cheap and awkward. The plot is good.

Which old eunuch is the reincarnation of your writing style? 😰

Why is it that there is no human mother? It's still not interesting enough.

I don't know if more people will read this book, but at least the current plot is really good.

Investigation report: "Number" - 651 Investigation target: "The Completion Plan of Asian Girls from Another World" - Male Protagonist - [Qi Xiuge Solorens] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation] Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know the time-travel situations of people traveling in this world in advance, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on May 22, 2026

I'm giving you 2 monthly passes. I hope you can survive this winter and I hope you don't have too many bad jokes.

The last words on the electric chair were...? Hell here i come