Konoha: Starting as an Auditor at the Mao Spiritual Arts Academy

For Naruto travelers who have the Death Panel, the safety issue has been solved in the early stages. So most authors who write about Naruto cannot do without the aspect of combat power. Speaking of Captain Death's swastika being released, punching age spots, and kicking Otsutsuki, what else is there in the story of Naruto? I don't understand everyone's impatience right now... Maybe they've read too many fan stories and are too lazy to go through the "cut scenes"? In fact, aren't fan fiction just cutscenes of extra episodes? What the author wrote is correct, and there is no problem with strength control. I think carefully... It is that the author is not very mature in controlling the panel... What you want to express and what you give back are not consistent. Do more things, like the name "Black Death" (the protagonist's process of becoming famous, his actions and achievements are actually the most direct demonstration of his strength level in your book) Otherwise, write Zhanquan Zougui to the SSSSSS level... Everyone just knows that he is very strong, how strong? It's not specific and can't be measured numerically. These are not allowed. Let me give you an example. Suppose you find a certain person in the fandom, let's say Minato. When he completes three battles and becomes most famous, it means that he is the strongest in Naruto, and the protagonist's battle with him can reveal the protagonist's strength. This involves whether the original characters are well known to everyone, whether the strength level is familiar to everyone, and whether the results of the battle between the two are clearly written, so that the protagonist's combat power can be intuitively displayed. The panels are subdivided into those and what capabilities are used. It's like if you draw a handful of cards, no matter who cares, you have to play them out to explain the rules. A set of currency is issued, and you have to spend it to buy something to prove whether the denomination has the purchasing power... The author is not arrogant in writing the book, but sees that the protagonist's current... Accumulated strength and the displayed limit are so different that most readers comment on the issue of combat power.

There are a lot of people writing about the combination of Mirror Flower, Suigetsu and Naruto.

Why is it that it's already chapter 70 before the new book is put into storage?

One thing to note, the male protagonist in your main text and introduction are different, so I suggest you change the introduction: When I read your introduction, I thought it was the kind of article where the male protagonist shows off in front of him and pretends to be cool. After reading more than 20 photos, I found that the male protagonist is calmer and the author's writing style is more literary. This is not typical at all. The kind of pretentious article I saw,,, is really too separate from your profile. I guess your profile will dissuade many people. If I hadn't had the time to go in and take a look, I usually wouldn't click on your profile. You should really change the profile again. At least the persona should be consistent.

The protagonist's indiscriminate taunting aura is very bright 🙂

I have a question, should I accept Sarutobi Hiruzen and Danzo?

So far, before it was put on the shelves, the writing was pretty good. To be honest, the writing was very good. I think the problem that people mentioned the most was the combat power, but I don't think it's anything. Other than that, there aren't many problems.

Brother, let's break out at least 3 should be a regular update Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I have had a dream since I was a child to merge the world of Naruto and the world of Bleach. Reading the author's novel finally made my dream come true. The author's writing style is delicate and clear, and the plot design has ups and downs. It is a good book worth recommending.

I came across this new work about the Shinigami's ability to travel through Naruto by chance. It's not a long series at the beginning, but I found a treasure at a glance! The author must be praised! The Naruto + Bleach dual IP linkage itself is easy to set up to collapse. Either the Death god's combat power will kill and crush the ninja world, or the two systems will be forcibly separated, but the author stabilized the rhythm at the beginning. The collision of spiritual pressure and chakra, the foreshadowing of the Zanpakutō, and the contrast between Shunpo and Ninjutsu are all laid out very delicately. There is no brainless accumulation of combat power. It can be seen that the settings of the two worldviews were carefully considered before writing, and the sincerity is directly fulfilled. The characters appear at a comfortable pace in the opening chapter, and the protagonist's adaptation process after time travel is naturally unobtrusive and logical. There is no reckless rush like Long Aotian at the beginning. The original character design of Naruto has not strayed too far. The familiar atmosphere has been restored with just a few strokes, and old readers can instantly relate to it. The writing is smooth and neat, with no redundant text, and the foreshadowing is just right. In just a few chapters, it aroused strong curiosity, and I am especially looking forward to the famous scene of the subsequent awakening of the Zanpakutō and the confrontation with all the forces in the ninja world. The fact that the new work has such a high degree of completion at the beginning is enough to show that the author has solid writing skills and excellent imagination. I am really optimistic about the follow-up development of this fanfic and will definitely collect and subscribe to it! Don't worry about the update, I will always stay tuned for updates, and I highly recommend friends who are fans of both Naruto and Bleach to join the game!

It's been a long time since I've read a conspiracy theory system novel. On the one hand, the system can build a pseudo-Aizen, but on the other hand, the system is almost hacked by the pseudo-Aizen. It's quite contradictory.

Namikaze Minato

White Night