Wizard: I Can Disassemble the Entries

In the first part, the potions teacher sells marijuana-like gadgets, and later in the story he sells potions suspected of being drugs. After making a fortune, he starts spending money on magic wands, completely ruining the character of the protagonist. A wizard apprentice has a 20,000 wand, and there is a level 9 wizard behind him. The probability of the currency system collapsing is very high, and it feels like it will still be a common problem among wizards, starting at the beginning and ending at the end.

I've read several chapters. Advantages: The writing style is much better than other new wizard books. Others feel like it is at the tomato level, and none of the narrative descriptions are up to standard. Disadvantages: The golden finger is too complicated and not written clearly, which directly persuades people to quit.

The protagonist is a Yuman who is a hybrid of the human Yu clan, but the Yu clan is written too much like humans. The general environment is that human wizards invade the Yu clan and colonize the Yu clan world. The protagonist, as a Yu clan wizard, relies on his own Yu clan blood to invade the Yu clan, and he does a lot of massacres of villages. It feels a bit "rare". Considering that the Yu tribe worships the Quetzalcoatl, the protagonist is a mixed-blood Indian and white man, and he follows the white man to scalp the Indians. This subject matter is too weird.

There have been a lot of entries recently about wizard novels

The background environment is that wizards are the invaders, and the protagonist will most likely become an accomplice. Climb up by killing natives

The wizard's colonial expeditions to countless dimensions reflect the colonial era in reality, when Western powers colonized the world. The thought of this makes me feel uncomfortable! Aren't those wizards reflections of the Western powers? ! And weren't those who were colonized and slaughtered Indians? ! Wizards claim to be civilized people and bring civilization to other planes. This is so similar to those hypocritical colonists in reality. They appear to be one thing but secretly are another. They label themselves as beacons. In fact, the interior is very dark!

What a perfect start. The protagonist travels to the indigenous people colonized by wizards, becomes a wizard, saves his own race, and reaches the peak of wizards.

People who look at the character's background just scratch their heads. Golden Finger is a bit complicated. It will accumulate a lot of entries in the end, which is a test of writing skills. With the blessing of a bunch of entries, the result is that the combat power is not good. If the battle is not brilliant and there are no highlights, it will definitely collapse. Now I feel a little bit like this. At the beginning I didn't see the extraordinary skills that are the highlight in fantasy novels here. I only know that a fireball is good at playing, and there is no explanation at all about other witchcraft. It is very awkward to describe the battle process like this. You become stronger inexplicably and win easily, like a long-running battle.

The more you look at it, the more poisonous it becomes. The poisonous point is super high. What are you doing?

What does it mean to write the end of volume one? If it is not handled well, it will be extremely poisonous, but if it is handled well, it will be just that.

To be honest, I'm not very optimistic about the author's completion of this book, because the whole world's cultivation system still felt like it was foggy when I reached Chapter 19. In addition, the protagonist's golden finger also has contradictory parts. The author can conduct experiments on this book and learn lessons. I hope that the next one will be a high-quality one.

I've recommended a book to you, and I've also changed the title of the book to become an entry wizard.

1. The golden finger has novel ideas but its effect is not obvious. 2. The protagonist's identity and background are not explained. His growth trajectory is like a white witch, but his behavior is like a black witch 😅. The time traveler kills indiscriminately 3. There are many poison points and the villain's intelligence is severely reduced.

The only flaw is the 99% bonus, which drives away readers.

It's a big subject and written in a petty style.

The setting is too complex and the description is not intuitive

If you look at the catalog of works, there is a book called Eunuch.

I would like to ask the author, what is your central idea in writing this novel? The little characters grow up all the way, and then they are written around several points. What kind of system should be used to achieve what kind of story effect? What kind of climax can be reached? To be honest, even if this novel is recommended, it won't have very good results.

It's well written, but the word count is too few. I'm waiting to subscribe.

I don't know what the protagonist is doing, he's being pushed around the whole time