Beginning with the Magician

It feels like the author should have an outline. Overall, it was okay. I felt that the plot was moving a bit too fast later on, but judging from the new chapter, the protagonist should have gone to sea. The previous foreshadowing has basically been completed, and it has landed smoothly. The protagonist suffered from poor information in the early stage and was deceived all over the place. However, a group of people who were usually stubborn ended up taking advantage of the situation and ran away with a group of subordinates. Currently, it seems that the core fighting method of the protagonist is to add dream killing with spells, which has an excellent effect on killing vegetables. The protagonist can't be called a good guy or a bad guy, but when fighting, he really only chooses to crush the opponent. If the opponent is slightly stronger, he will lead his men to fight in groups. After gaining new abilities, he will take the route of team fights. Generally speaking, I still hope that the author will continue to write well and write books without routines. I am tired of seeing some bad themes on the site. I still hope that there will be more good-looking books in the original section.

The book can still be read. I hope the author will not be too greedy or too profit-seeking, and let us spend money to read it 🙂

The plot is very confusing, the protagonist is suddenly taken away, suddenly becomes a gang, and suddenly accepts a career

Tomorrow is Tuesday, which is very important for a young author like me😭😭

Maintaining this quality is worthy of being a great emperor

Very strange. There's nothing wrong with each of the subplots, but it's just weird when they're connected together. The part about being threatened by another time traveler's greed is a bit difficult to comment on. The most unacceptable thing is that the daughter of her mentor Charlie was sacrificed and resurrected as a demon, before another time traveler took her away. In terms of rhythm, it started with the demon hunter church section, and then quickly moved into starting a company, and then suddenly discovered that the protagonist was not the only one who traveled through time, but there were many other time travellers. Then he was forced to inherit the apostle, and then went to sea. It was a bit confusing. Anyway, keep going.

The twist is too abrupt. He was caught cheating a vampire. After escaping, he encountered injustice and killed the vampire to save others. He was taught a dangerous mission 😥. It would be better to seize the ship and stay away from this place.

The level setting is quite interesting. If the protagonist doesn't lose his wits, I feel like he has a chance to become popular.

I would like to ask if there is a profession called "player", or if there is a profession with the label "unique". Player (unique), the profession panel of this world is like a game. The time traveler is too low. Even if he travels through time, he still cannot escape from the career panel and then join the title system.

I'll sign it if you ask me to.

I can't understand it a bit, from a tavern owner to a business tycoon, to an apostle inexplicably, and then to One Piece... It looks a little confusing to me

It seems to be in a seaport city as the background. But I don't understand why I offended the vampire and ran south. According to legend, vampires must be more active in the south, so they must run in the opposite direction.

The first picture was really cut too fast, and the previous data was a bit poor. I think maybe people didn't want to see a slow-moving plot, so they cut a lot of small branches in the outline and went too fast. Looking at it now, the effect may not be that good. Instead, the plot is empty and the rhythm is broken. I will write the current sea picture in as much detail as possible. Some people say that they like to watch the development of farming, and there will definitely be content on this aspect later. After all, the protagonist's biggest golden finger is to upgrade himself and his teammates. He will definitely develop his own power and become the leader of a secret organization ( Some people say that my data is broken , in fact, I have been thinking about the balance between professions. A strong mechanism will definitely have low values, and a mechanism with high values will be relatively simple. Although I may not show each person who appears in the book, I have written down his character profession and values in detail to judge what actions he will make. However, My writing skills are poor and I may not be able to demonstrate it well. I'm sorry. I will definitely finish my first book well. I really feel that my understanding of writing books has deepened a lot since I wrote it. If I can finish it well, I guess my ability will also improve a lot Thank you to every reader who reads my book, whether you criticize me or encourage me, I thank you all for reading. I will try my best to present a story I want to write. Finally, I weakly ask for a follow-up reading 🐷🐷

It feels like the level system is a bit like the system in Overload

Don't tell me you're already a eunuch.

First of all, the illusion is not very much like illusion, like hypnotism, and there is no formal arrangement of illusions or spells to set up illusions Secondly, if illusion is the main ability of the protagonist, I feel that it is suitable for thieves and law systems. , Long-range sniper killing, illusion is a magical skill for sneak assassination and long-range sniping, Thousand Faces Technique, a woman sneaks in to care about me and a man, in an emergency, I run away and cast a clone to create an illusion, the enemy does not know which one to hit, the environment mimics the barrier to form an illusion, how can I shoot when I go to the stone Currently watching men Demon hunters are considered warriors, and illusion warriors are not as convenient as illusion assassins or illusion mages.

The author's writing is getting better and better, witty and interesting, and the writing about the senior time traveler is even better, Water - Water, things that happened in different periods are connected at once. There are many people writing the same thing, but there are fewer people who are so wonderful. After reading to the front, I still wonder why I suddenly want to talk about the indigenous sheep-burning sacrifice, now 🙂