Time Travel at the Same Time, the Arbitrariness of Eternity Begins with Dragon and Snake

After reading the latest chapter, I felt an indescribable feeling of embarrassment. The hanging man is completely unscrupulous. The protagonist is still worried about this and other things. If he doesn't kill him immediately, he will just wait for the other party to do it in the future.

I'll show you the way to write Douluo, Naruto and Pirates. If you can, don't let go of the Super Seminary. Once you finish writing The Great God, you can expect platinum gold.

I hate this kind of super hypocritical writing. The protagonist often doesn't have much of his own thoughts. He usually takes the words of his teacher or others as a guideline. When others say you shouldn't kill too hard, you take it as a guideline. Plots such as nipping danger in the cradle, eradicating the root, and killing everyone will never appear in the protagonist of this kind of book. Sometimes when killing someone, you have to think about it for a long time, and then you can move yourself, convince yourself, and then say who said this truth. It is very clear-minded. This kind of writing might have been popular ten years ago, but now this kind of writing will only make the protagonist feel miserable. The readers are unhappy with it. The author doesn't think about what the current social climate is. Everyone's idea is to kill the enemies in the entire line if there is danger, so that all kinds of bloody things will not happen in the future.

I hope it won't be like the previous book, with too many irrelevant branches and redundant plots.

I feel frustrated and happy when I write it, I really don't think my grades are good enough

After reading Chapter 6, I really couldn't stand it anymore. He killed someone and wanted to report it as self-defense. He went to find a connection because he wanted to self-defense. In the end, he ran away, and then a group of policemen arrested him in the university classroom with guns. What kind of operation is this? The protagonist is Sha Bao, who doesn't know how to call the police. The person he asks for help is a fool. He can't solve the problem and lets him go. The police are fools. They suddenly surrounded the school classroom with live ammunition. From this, we can know what the author can write.

The writing is indiscriminate of priority, your main world is covering the sky, the author and the details are inappropriate

Is the main world a dragon and a snake? If not, the pace of the dungeon world can be faster.

I have a question. If you kill someone in a righteous act and don't turn yourself in or run away, why are you waiting for the police to come?

In the middle and later stages of the world of dragons and snakes, when you turn to spiritual practice, you can refer to the method of covering the sky and create a system of "taking the heart as the seed"! The mind is infinite, which is much more exciting than physical excavation! 🤭

The rhythm of Dragon Snake is not well written, the main world is covering the sky, and the development in Dragon Snake is too bland.

You don't have the slightest bit of coolness when wearing the same clothes

It's difficult. I spent a lot of chapters writing about a world of dragons and snakes that are destined to be abandoned. It would be better to set dragons and snakes as the main world, and I can cover the sky and wait for other people's worlds to have a more hopeful feeling.

Traveling together means that a person has traveled through several parts and traveled through different worlds. Each one has an independent consciousness, and then there is a common space where they can share talents, knowledge, memories and abilities with each other. And the selves in each world will use the shared abilities to become stronger in this world. The cool thing is that the power systems of multiple worlds collide, and each world is a hexagonal warrior. Moreover, when one in the lower world shares his own abilities in the higher world, he can quickly become stronger and achieve a cool point. Look what you wrote? When the self in other worlds dies, the main world will inherit their will and go to the other world to complete their will. This is the same consciousness from beginning to end, and there are not multiple consciousnesses unique to Tongchuan. This is obviously the flow of the heavens. Especially if you have a setting like the main world, how can you have a main world in the same suit? Aren't they all written back and forth, just write whatever is hot? Seeing the latest chapter, your structure is like Zhutianliu. You will stay in a certain world and write for a very long time. Many mistakes made by Zhutianwen. Travel flow is fast, and worlds can be switched relatively quickly. A world can be changed immediately after writing twenty or thirty chapters. Small plots follow small plots. When the number of people sharing reaches a certain number, explosive plots in highly popular worlds will be added, such as the top battle among pirates, Naruto's fourth ninja war, the dark turmoil that covers the sky, the one-man Luotian Conference, the dragon king's battle among the dragons, etc.

Or covering the sky? Why do I see the protagonist who is a successful practitioner always pretending to accompany women in the city? Then you might as well just write about cultivators living in the city.

The title of the article is refreshing and the plot is refreshing, but the writing style is draggy and vague. Talking to yourself is a bit ugly.

One advantage of Dragon Snake is that the state of seeing gods and not bad is actually equivalent to that of human immortals in Yangshen, another book of Shenji. However, during the dragon and snake period, the earth did not have supernatural energy such as spiritual energy, so seeing gods not bad was malnourished and could not be as good as human immortals. But as long as it comes into contact with supernatural energy, its combat power immediately soars.

Speechless, I traveled through time at the same time, and ended up writing almost half a million words in the first world. Isn't the purpose of traveling at the same time to quickly accumulate from different worlds and then become stronger at a high speed? You are cultivating each world intensively, that is called unlimited flow

With more than 50 chapters covering the sky, Dragon Snake is not over yet

Zhutianwen is a failure, but it's still good to watch as a fan of Dragon Snake

Dragon Snake is so boring, changing the world is so slow

I found out that this book was exempt from the entry limit, so I came back to read it. In fact, the world of dragons and snakes is quite well written, but this book is about simultaneous time travel. Writing too much about dragons and snakes would deviate from the main line.

With this way of writing, you want to write from Dragon Snake to Galaxy Emperor? Does the protagonist need to practice to the point where he can go from Ming Jin, Dark Jin, Hua Jin, Dan Jin, Gang Jin to see the gods and not be bad? Practice deep sleep again, enter samadhi, fetal breath, sit and forget, manifest the saint, the saint of the great road True God, Ancestral God, Tianzun, and the realm of the great emperor can he return to the realm of Zhetian?

I have read too many Zhutianwen before, most of the Zhutianwen in the past few years have plots in the world of dragons and snakes, so I skipped the entire plot of dragons and snakes in this book. I felt that it was getting better after returning to the main world, and it looked pretty good. Dragon snake. The writing style is definitely good, but if there are too many, it will feel a bit repetitive. I really feel that the more I write, the more interesting this book becomes. It's just that the author's copy is too long. It needs to have more than 50 to 60 pictures. I feel that about 30 or 40 at most is enough. The author has his own ideas, just follow his own ideas, I don't give orders. I have been reading novels for several years and have never written a single novel. Can't command others. If I don't say this last sentence, I'm afraid of being criticized by others.

It doesn't matter how many times you increase it 😅 because the priests don't talk about combat power in the beginning.

I'm not a gangster, but I don't understand. If the protagonist encounters a snake demon in the Shenqiao realm and then travels to the world of dragons and snakes, what state will he reach and can he have sex with him? Until the time of Emperor Xinghe, it is still possible to defeat those who seek to defeat the dragon snake's martial arts. Will it take some effort to defeat the snake demon?

Just don't write too many worlds, and just compare Dragon Snake Yang Shen Xinghe's martial arts style against the Zhetian trilogy, but Zhetian's single universe really can't compete with Xinghe.

After reading the first chapter, I think the protagonist is being merciful and should break all the limbs of Curly Hair and let him continue to live a life of torture.

I feel that Dragon Snake is more suitable for the kind of world-by-world cultivation. After all, his spiritual cultivation is very strong. Seeing that God is not bad in the Galaxy Emperor is almost equivalent to sitting and forgetting. As long as he has spiritual energy, his combat power will explode. However, the combat power of a simple dragon and snake is still a bit low. He is more suitable to slowly cultivate to the top, and then go to other worlds to contact spiritual energy. If you contact other worlds too early, it is easy to make yourself invincible in terms of combat power, but your spiritual realm cannot rise because no one can beat you.

In Chapter 18, it is said that the Yinshan Mountains are the Ural Mountains. I am not sure about the possibility, but it is true that no ancient ruins with Chinese characters have been found in the Ural Mountains. However, it is indeed logical that the Yinshan Mountains in Inner Mongolia are located on the 400 mm precipitation line, and the Zhao Great Wall from the Warring States Period and the stone inscriptions from the Tang Dynasty were indeed found on it. From a Chinese and Han perspective, I certainly hope that my ancestors really reached the Ural Mountains, but the actual evidence does not prove this. I hope that the national border can be expanded there in the future instead of pursuing the glory of my ancestors in vain. But reading novels is all about having fun, so what if the ancestors of the world were there?