Staying in the Demons' Chaos, the Body Is Sanctified

This plot makes me want to laugh. The first escort is robbed, but the result is that the dart cannot be defeated and is robbed. According to the normal situation, the sacrifice will be the end of the whole drama. Look at what is written, the normal logic is that the whole drama will end, which is impossible. You might as well bump into other escorts, or stronger people, or the fishing officer and the Yamen during the robbery. It is better than writing a messy plot later.

First of all, thank you all readers! Secondly, the new book issue data is still very important, related to the future direction of the book, so readers, please support it if you can. Xiaoshui would like to thank all readers! Third, you are welcome to point out any areas that are not well written. I will take suggestions and modify them if I think they are really bad. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

🎭 Character design: The character design is quite satisfactory, without any surprises. Sometimes the protagonist's performance needs a little more foreshadowing, otherwise it will appear a bit abrupt. 🎬 Plot: There is generally nothing wrong with the plot, it's a fantasy Jida style eight-part story, but being an undercover agent is a bit off. If the protagonist is discovered, his chance to learn martial arts will be gone. ✒️Writing: I don't know if it's because the writing is not enough or for some reason. Occasionally, one or two sentences are a bit off, but the plot is smooth and everything I want to express is fully expressed.

The story is very well written. I'm here to support you. Come on!

How should I put it? It's worth a try, but it's too slow 🙂